|Reviews for Fire|
| bulale chapter 4 . 5/11/2008
wel this is simply the greatest story ever! the tension is so, so true and honest and beautifully painful. i just cant wait for more
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
thank you very very much *squeal*
| heatherkinz chapter 4 . 5/10/2008
This chapter is seriously hot!
Can not wait for more
| ThankGoodness chapter 4 . 5/9/2008
you. are. pure. evil. for doing that to me.
| RachelAe chapter 4 . 5/9/2008
OH MY GOD! I really hope someone doesn't decide to interrupt them right now. I love how Elphaba is so surprised by all the new feelings she's experiencing; how she's trying to put every feeling and action into measurable boxes. Ooh. I want to know what Galinda's thinking right now. Please don't make them get interrupted by a knock on the door or something like that.
| Love That Wicked chapter 4 . 5/9/2008
All I can say is AW! I just hope no one knocks on the door to interrupt their kiss. And you're absolutely right... it can be a bear to get them that close can't it?
Please keep this coming. It's great!
| KaraLee713 chapter 4 . 5/9/2008
AH! Holy crap, you're killing me here, haha. I love this story more than I could ever possibly say. When I got the notification that the 4th chapter was up, I re-read 1-3 just for the sheer enjoyment of it, and still am totally enthralled... GAH! I can't stand the waiting for a moment longer, update soon! :)
| Literaryluminations chapter 4 . 5/9/2008
I see the button... I pressed the button, I'm becoming the button, to say THANK YOU! THAT WAS AWESOME! WOO! Thank you for updating! You are amazing! I love how you write!
| Lauranathalasa chapter 4 . 5/9/2008
Geez, you're so mean :P. But I truly adore the way you chose the words to describe their feelings that's why I'll forgive you *grin*.
Just keep it up, it's great work :)
| Spontaneous Combusken chapter 3 . 5/3/2008
Oh, this is wonderful so far. I absolutely love the way you write Elphaba coming to terms with things so far outside her control; it's so damn cute.
Your writing is excellent. There are a couple of descriptions and phrases here and there that make me smile so much; "volcano of blonde curls", "didn’t have the faintest acquaintance with normal" and loads more.
I also really love the dialogue between the two; Galinda's use of long words when she's angry is just too cute, and the almost forced formality between the two is so fun to read.
Looking forward to more
| Love That Wicked chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
So now Elphaba needs to turn around and kiss her to rekindle the fire. But that would make it too easy, so I guess I'm going to have to wait and see what happens next. LOL
This is great. Give us more soon.
| 0xKissMeGoodbyex0 chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
Good story! Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens!
| Mn04K chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
Ah, sweet angst. Usually I'm all for the fluff, but some good quality old fashioned angst is always a good thing.
Keep 'em coming, please!
| KaraLee713 chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
Oh gosh that was excellent. :) I get really worked up over this story, haha. Loving the angst, and it was a nice break from the criminology paper that I should be writing (that's a wholly different, entirely less enjoyable kind of angst) :p
Can't wait for more, update soon!
| unrestrictedparadise chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
Yes an update! Great update, albeit a bit depressing, but still! lol. I love how you write.
| Literaryluminations chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
I'm clicking and reviewing, clicking and reviewing. Aw. Poor Elphie, poor Galinda. Update soon okay?