Reviews for Nobody's Fool
xxx.Syoshiro03.xxx chapter 9 . 1/10
I really like the story! It is so great! :D When will you post the epilogue? Can't wait XDv :)
Alice-in-chucks chapter 8 . 7/3/2014
Also, I have not played the Final Fantasy that Balthier appears in, but your portrayal of him is brilliant. Whenever he spoke I imagined him having a British accent.
Alice-in-chucks chapter 9 . 7/3/2014
You totally got me xD did not see that coming. I've been looking for a good Rikuroku fic, and this is the best one I've found so far. This site is sorely lacking in Rikuroku, and it's hard to even search for, since it usually just finds Soriku and Akuroku. Anyway, this was really great, and I know it's been a very long time, but I would still be interested in an epilogue if you're still interested in writing it. But if you're too far removed from this plot and these characters by now, I understand.
Haha, I would go with Rox to beat up Axel. He was bothering me the whole time.
Thank you for writing this :)
PandoraMagic chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
I ship them now. But it was so sweet that I thought I might cry. I love it. Thank you for the hard work.
TerrenceG9 chapter 9 . 8/29/2012
Glad I stumbled across this story! Definitely the best Riku/Roxas fic I've read. I'm sure I'll be rereading this story at some point in the future.

If you ever did continue with your idea of a blooper reel/epilogue, I would love to see a little something with Blathier. Even though his appearance was short he left a good impression.
TerrenceG9 chapter 5 . 8/29/2012
Big fan of the addition of Balthier. It works. I WILL finish reading this!
TerrenceG9 chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
I like how, for once, Axel and Roxas don't click with eachother. It's something different, I like how Roxas is so unsure of things. Looking forward to continuing!
TerrenceG9 chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Loving it so far, can't wait to read the rest! Caught my eye from the first sentence.
I'd suggest changing the story status to complete though, I initially thought this to be an abandoned effort.
XionAmmy chapter 9 . 5/13/2012
Okay, canon parallels... well, obviously, the blindfold thing. ... but I can't think of anything else *is sad*

Anyway... one thing that would be cool would be to see this from Riku's POV... like, "okay, we've seen what Roxas saw, now let's see what Riku was going through while all of this was going on" because I think that would be pretty interesting (plus, not only would it be kinda cool to get his viewpoint on various events, but I'd kinda like to know where all the bruises came from... I'm assuming it was his father's handiwork, but we can't really be sure, now, can we?).

I take it by your "bloopers reel" comment that the story (at least, Roxas's story) is over... which makes me kind of sad. I'd like to see where their lives go from here, but it's not completely and totally necessary... nor is it as interesting as Riku's side of this story.

All of that aside, this was an awesome story, one I'm glad I read-and, eventually, reviewed-even if I got into it late in the game (lol, it's the end. How much later in the game can you get?).
tunachurro chapter 9 . 4/8/2012
I read this some time last month, and I remember my flailing after certain moments, and lots of keyboard smashing, which made me hold back saying anything incoherent xD

...then I went to go look for it again, and I kid you not I was freaking out when I couldn't find it in the complete section cos I never got to say anything LOL. But now that I've reread it, laughed like a deranged seal at certain parts (Rikuccino made me think of Pokemon lololol), and pretty much cried (no, no, teared up!) at the angst moments, I still don't know how to express my love for this apart from saying that I love you for writing it!

And started off as badfic? GIRL, I THINK WE'D GET ALONG JUST FINE. :D

I really have no clue how to review this, since reading it all in one go does that to me, but honestly, thanks for exploring this pairing and giving us all an awesome read! Even if there is an epilogue to go, I feel like it is already complete with this ending. Giving us to wonder the ups and downs of their relationship, y'know? :D

Anyway, I get the feeling I'll be rereading this quite a bit xD so don't be surprised if your hit count for this goes up more haha :D

Again, thanks!
matchynishi chapter 9 . 2/8/2012
loved this, just, wow. thank you so much for sharing!
Takara yume chapter 9 . 12/29/2011
this is the most beautiful, sweetest epic thing I've ever read. *w*

I just love it! How you portrayed the characters and story, the pacing was not dragging at all nor too fast. this was a very incredible read~~ I'm glad it all worked out in the end~ QwQ

damn Axel. XDD he planned it all. But it was all for good intentions I suppose~

though he'll be hurting anyways, courtesy of Roxas. lol.

anyway, can't wait for the epilogue ~ Good luck~ w

Well done on this~
666random4life chapter 9 . 12/15/2011
luv it! XD lol but i would never forgive my friends if they ever did tht to me
Pop Soda chapter 8 . 7/18/2011
omg

tyki what r u doing there!:D

Awesome story! I'm almost to the what seems to be the end.:)
Siry.Pop chapter 9 . 8/26/2010
Loved it! i wasn't so sure about the idea of Riku and Roxas together but i have to say it was amazing. i really hope you put the epilogue hahahaha i just want to read more of these two! and i can honestly say your story it's by far the best RikuRoxas in here.

well congratulations!

P.s i really hope there isn't any typos, I'm writing in the dark and i'm sleepy hehehehe :) take care
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