|Reviews for Make Us Whole Again|
| The Immortal Ootsutsuki chapter 1 . 4/10
I accidentally read 510 words as 510k words due to no of favs and follows. Then I nearly tear my hair when I find that there is no link for next chapter. LOL. I thought that the website was defective then I when I read the reviews I realized that you are nothing but an Asshole. Fucking hell Man you can't just delete the whole story. Dick move man really dick move. If you wanted to rewrite this then you could have started a new fiction with an A/N on this one that you are starting a rewrite.
| whovian803 chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
| anime2551 chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Omg. Why did u delete it ._. That's just SAD
| bletez chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
| Darth Atrox chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
I am terribly disappointed.
Seriously? You really deleted everything? What the fuck is wrong with you?
I don't like to include profanity when I review stories, but I have to make an exception in this case, because you, MatrixExplosion, are a piece of shit.
I used to have a lot of respect for you. I loved your work. I read and reread your story dozens of times. It was pure GOLD. But now, I come and attempt to read your brilliant story once again in over a year, and I find this.
You didn't even have the decency to upload a proper beginning to this rewrite, and it's been nearly a year since it's supposed "reboot."
You failed to learn one of the most basic tenants of art. Art belongs to the world. As artists, we create things for the people to consume and enjoy. Some artists, however, don't seem to realize that we don't own what we create. You wrote this story, but it wasn't yours. It was ours. Without us, it was just streams of code on the internet. We made your creation special, and you don't have the right to take it away from us.
I know this probably doesn't mean much, coming from a third-rate author, but you have no artistic integrity. I have myself have stories that I abandoned, BUT I WOULD NEVER DELETE THEM. Why not? They are God-Awful. Unlike you, MatrixExplosion, I know that my work doesn't belong to me. It belongs to the people who read and enjoy it.
I don't have the right to deprive the people of my work. Neither do you.
If you wanted to do a reboot, all you had to do was upload a cancellation chapter, and start a new story altogether. NOT FUCKING DELETE THE WHOLE STORY FROM THE WEBSITE!
Like I said, this probably doesn't mean much from a piss poor writer like myself, but if you're reading this, and you have an ounce of Artistic Integrity and Responsibility, then please, re-upload your original story.
If you aren't happy with it, you don't have to continue it. But don't let this one "rebooted" chapter be the only thing left of your amazing work. It doesn't deserve it. We don't deserve it. And you, sure as hell, don't deserve it either.
Please, re-upload the story.
| DudeWTF chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
If you aren't going to rewrite the story, re-upload the old one!
It may have been incomplete, but it was 10 pages of pure GOLD.
Please, do NOT FUCKING TELL ME that you don't have a back-up somewhere!
Re-upload it GODDAMMIT!
| crazyrubsoff chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
I saw a link to this on TV Tropes and it looked to be really interesting but now most of it is gone and I feel really disappointed... Please get the rewrite up soon.
| mndstjohn chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
| dalulzing chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
you have my attention
| Musubi Kazesaru chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Even if you're rewriting it, it's kinda sad to see the original go down, it was one of my favorites :(
| Bluefoxes chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
I was looking throu my librairy of fanfics and found I havent read shinigamis touch I got to chapter 14 right before naruto and neji faut so then I had to update and found its sad now disregard any bad grammer problems please im useing a phone
| izyizy chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
I have no idea where you plan on going with this, but having read the first attempt, i think you could make it a kick-ass story.
| Addiction's Curse chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Ho Interesting. Well described too.
| A W chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
How on earth did this get over a thousand reviews and over 2k favs? There are no characters, no dialog, nothing really happens.
| Patrick the observer chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
...WTF did i just read... i mean this sounds awesome but... seriously i have no idea how this has any connection to Naruto or what the heck just happened. here's hoping that the next chapter comes out soon, is longer then this and will give this scene some much needed context.