Wow this was really powerful. Nice Job, made me a bit sad :C

Aww, poor Bardock...

i think that my favritepart was the whole i cant belive that most of the people who read this story CRIED/Ididnt cry i didnt thinkthat it was sad.

Very good! Bardock is one of my favorite characters and it's interesting to see his last thoughts and visions of his son be stretched out.

Lol. Very nice POV.

the end mad me laugh and not cry like other people, weird right?

That was Just like Bardock Thoughts and feeling in the movie Bardock the father of son Goku. It was a awsome Fan Fic story

great oneshot! Hey,I am thinking of maybe doing a DBZ fic, but I don't know what about... I get ALL my DBZ info from fics and the games, never saw the anime... if you have any pointers could you help me out? This was a great story from Bardock's POV

That was good. I love Bardock! This oneshot almost made me cry...but it was kinda happy, in the end. Keep up the good work! _

Wow that was great. Thanks for your review. I got another up. Please read it.

This is a great job!

"Planet Vegeta, that blood-red sphere resting alone in the infinite darkness of space...", this sounds poetical and epic! And I love introspective stories!Generally I prefer long stories but this was very good even if a bit short... Short and incisive, but gripping... Mesmerizing! _

That is so beautiful! Could almost feel Bardock's care about his very own son. I love the last line the best! Keep up the great work!

...AMAZING! Did I spell that right? WHO CARES? MAGNIFICENT! SPECTACULAR! BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES! You should write this kind of stuff more ofter! Breath-taking...It's the best oneshot I've ever READ! Words cannot describe...

love it update soon

WOW! *blink blink* that was great! :)