it didn't give me good feels in my brain chemicals, but it wasn't meant to. rather than a crossover where things in each setting change slightly, you embrace something very interesting.
that the amount of friction of this crossover almost makes it impossible for anything to go well. The internal logic is iron clad, and I can believe every character would act exactly like that in those contexts.

it also means that since meeting naruto, ed has been going through near constant kidnapping, torture and failed rescue for weeks.
every single character introduced is used to make Edward suffer more, likeable or not.

I saw a lot of negative comments, and to readers, and the author, I ask you ignore them. this is a good, well written fic who's only crime is being a little sadistic about it.
I cant say I enjoyed it, because there hasn't been any resolution to the torture yet, but when and if that comes around this will be even more worth reading

its surprising how much of the chapter El is usually awake

Damn, to end right as elric agrees with the death god.
Damn the worst cliff hanger.

Sometimes I see the reviews that other people will leave on anon and I wonder what the fuck is wrong with them. Hope you’re well, and much love.

What a crap story. Go stick a dick in your mouth. You're not good at writing. You're a waste of life

NARUTO IS THE FAULT IN ALL OF THIS. THAT DUMB BLONDE SHOULD GO DIE WHAT A USELESS PUECE OF SHIT

THIS STORY IS RUBBISH! WTF! WHAT A WASTE OF TIME. GO KILL YOURSELF!

dang why’d the story have to leave off at such an interesting part :(

This is such a great story. I hope you come back to it someday.

Love this crossover! Interesting take I reread it at least once a year

Arms

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This is so good! Yeah, it did get a little dark there, but I'm sure that you'll be back to humor in no time!

Even if Ed does tell them how alchemy works, I doubt Danzo will be able to do it, for reasons ranging from "Ed is a genius and it's hard for smart people to explain things that they Just Get" to "the science and technology of the two worlds are so different that Danzo just might not have the basic scientific knowledge necessary to anything with it" and more.

And now that I think of it, that poor family has very little chance of surviving unless someone else finds them all first - Villains have a bad habit of not believing the protagonists, even when they're telling the truth, because it sounds too easy or too impossible or whatever. I'll just start mourning now so that if they do survive it's a pleasant surprise, and if they don't then I've already done most of the hard part.

How are you, BTW? Are you alive? Were you able to deal with COVID? Do you even want to continue this fic? I hope you're having a good day!

7 year

This is a classic thx for making it

rofl so all of a sudden they use a CLAN seal on him, hahah xD you're so fucking retarded dude, but hey at least you dropped it, showing some intelligence.