Feed me mother, I crave more.

This shit is amazing. Please let there be more.

I know this story hasnt updated in 4 years but i will have hope! This story was pieced together so masterfully and i love how you include so many different characters and make it all work together. Even if you dont finish this story just know what you have so far is a master piece!

Wow. Ok just wow. I just found this, and I am blown away with how amazing this is. I love this story, it’s everything I want from a Naruto Fullmetal cross over. Absolutely amazing.
I love what you did with each of the characters, how they are true to what I remember in cannon but you allowed them to grow a bit in your story. I love how you portray Hinata probably the most out of any fic I have read so far. I love the plot that you have going on and I love how much I HATE DONZO THAT PIECE OF TRASH.
Not sure if you’re still motivated to continue with the story for now, but I wanted to let you know that I throughly enjoyed what you have done so far. It was really fun to read and I’ll make sure to keep an eye out if you wright more!

Hope you revisit this one sometime. Preferably sooner than later, but seeing as the world is currently falling apart, I’d settle for knowing you’re still with us and still breathing. I hope things are going ok for you, and that you’re safe, healthy and happy.

Hello! Just checking in, I really love this story and I hope you can update soon. Just making sure you're, like, alive I guess. Stay safe!

I can’t help but wonder how Naruto is holding up through all of this. I felt for him a lot with his heartbreak in the last chapter. So many of his friend having uncertain futures, and presumed by everyone—(even himself at some intellectual level; but also refusing to believe it on the emotional level because Naruto is never one to give up on hope, especially for a friend’s sake).—-to be good as dead. Then comes this chapter, and evidence that one of those friends might still be alive! Only, said evidence implies that friend might have kidnapped/tortured/murdered Naruto’s other friend, who is now also missing.

Unless/Until Naruto learns about the note: Ed being alive and out of Orochimaru’s clutches, Something Naruto desperately wants to be true, would also mean accepting that Ed was the one who attacked Hinata.
Part of me isn’t sure that Naruto would think Edward is capable of of this. But then again, you did (maybe?) prime Naruto to suspicion, since the adults around him are always making reference to Kabuto’s betrayal. And it’s not like Ed would have zero motive for going after Hinata Hyuuga anyways...

Either way, it is probably another punch in the gut for Naruto, and I’m super curious about how he’s interpreting and processing through all of this.

Hope this comes back someday.

Comeback to this please!
It’s so good!

I hope you come back with this someday.
In the meantime, stay safe with the quarantine and stuff!

This fic is fantastic! I adore a good crossover, and this story really draws you in. Thank you so so much for writing this! Instant favorite

I swear, you and George RR Martin will be the death of me.

This is? So good? Like, damn, color me addicted. I really hope this isn't fully abandoned!

Ok, so, this is a great fic. Your interpretation of Konoha is darker than I remember as a kid, but geez is it effective. Edward is so angsty and I love it. The interactions he have are so genuine. Lee is so curious of him and felt a need to make a connection, Neji sought him out as an ally, Naruto had some sort of companionship, Hinata expressed some dept towards him. All of it was so good. The characterization from both sources seem very spot on. The original set of events keep the reader on their toes. Edward is the strongest character in all of this, his longing for Al is heartbreaking, but makes for some serious reflection of his motivation. I really enjoyed reading this. Have a nice day!

Quite a good story. Not yet another 'introduce a crossover character, yet nothing had changed' story.
Ed not immediately cooperating with the Leaf is also a plus. From an outsider's perspective, all Shinobi villages appear evil.