* high pitched screaming*

...i seriously want to strangle you right now. Fuck Danzo.
Btw, Roy as in Roy Mustang...? But no, I'm pretty sure Pride is that son of fuhrer right?

Ninja: "how did you know where the arm was?"
Elric: "lets just say a little bird told me" flashing a grin his way.
Ninja: smacks him "stop playing games!"

I really like what you have so far in this story! Your characterizations are spot on, the twists and turns the plot takes make logical sense, and there's a hearty dose of suspense that leaves me wanting more. If you ever update this again I'll be super excited.

I really like your characterizations here! Especially Naruto. I love how you capture his naivete/cheerfulness/enthusiasm. On to the next chapter!

That ending messed me up man.
I mean it's good. But damn.

I suppose Ibiki is just one of those fanatics that need to be brought down once in a while.

This is really good! I can't wait to see more!

i like this

You are wonderful and I hope you update soon!

Fxxk you Danzo. Fxxk you. TT

Was that Envy?

Dammit Ed...

You can do it Hinata! I believe in you!

Uh-oh..