| Reviews for The Truth Decays |
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   VeraciousFFConsumption chapter 19 . 7/10/2019 Noohoohoooo! I’m all caught up! ‘Sigh’ thanks for all the great story so far! Sorry you’re having trouble writing it. It is super interesting though! Such terrible consequences! I really appreciated all the chapters about the abduction, you did really well writing such extended fight scenes, and the POV shifts were pretty smooth. Ed really is one tough little (hehe) fighter ain’t he? I hope you can keep up this story, I’m really looking forward to reading more of it, even if that’s a year from now... anyway! Good job, and thank you! |
| VeraciousFFConsumption chapter 16 . 7/10/2019 Neh, this chapter wasn’t super terrible! The description of Hinata’s scenes were nice, at the Very least! |
| VeraciousFFConsumption chapter 8 . 7/9/2019 Bahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaahahahahaha |
| I chapter 19 . 7/4/2019 Talking about being on crack—got distracted and accidentally hit the ‘post review’ mid sentence fragment. Nevertheless, I don’t know what the rude person beneath me was smoking, because this story is great. Hands down you are the most creative writer I have ever encountered on this platform, and one of the most technically skilled as well. (My high school English teachers always said that you should be able to tell who is talking just by dialogue and voice of the POV character. Not only do manage to make every one of them distinguished individuals, but they are uniquely vibrant and full of life. You make me want to spend more time with them). I will forever hold out hope that this story will someday be updated. I shall wait until the end of time if I must! If you ever want to come back (on this story, but honestly on any of your stories or even a new one) we will be honored to have you back. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/4/2019 The last guy who reviewed this must have been on crack because this story is fantastic and you are, hands down And I will hold out in hope it will someday be updated until the end of time. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/21/2019 This is a terrible fucking story. |
| Chmia chapter 19 . 5/31/2019 Sad that it is over, but I had fun with what I did read. Thanks for writing. |
| Amythyst Aquarius chapter 19 . 5/3/2019 3 years later, still no update. |
| Mangoose chapter 19 . 5/1/2019 End it on a fantastic cliffhanger then leave the story for dead. Of course. |
| Mangoose chapter 18 . 5/1/2019 Like all, (if not most) dead fanfics, this is where you jumped the shark. Just have a random element appear out of nowhere to create some semblance of a plot. A mysterious man comes out of the blue and seems to know things no one else does and decides to help? There's nothing wrong with a cliche but at least use the good ones. |
| Mangoose chapter 17 . 5/1/2019 The main problem here is that you're dragging events out too much. Not to mention the events are predictably formulaic: Ed gets kidnapped, fights his way out/get rescued, get kidnapped again and etc. If you want a more progressive story, then include more character development and plot divergence for god's sake. |
| kindigo chapter 19 . 4/10/2019 I still love this story beyond words and years, and I still hope Ed is looking into the dark hallway at Death and saying “Yeah I’m gonna let you eat Danzo in a hot minute” My heart aches for Roy |
| homelybiscuit chapter 19 . 4/4/2019 Holy shit this fic is amazing. I haven't watched FMA in a long time, but I feel like you really captured Ed's personality. I'm absolutely in love with this fic and I would love to see where it goes from here if you're still working on it. Seriously amazing! |
| falsepermanence chapter 19 . 3/26/2019 this story sadly barely reached its full potential. oh how far it could go. maybe one day... |
| Mircea chapter 19 . 3/13/2019 Por favor solo quiero saber si se va a comer a Danzo |