|Reviews for The Truth Decays|
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/28
Most Fics with profanity are just rated T. You're good
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/19
I hope we get more of this soon. You write the best stories. :)
| Almaseti chapter 18 . 4/18
Oooh, I really enjoyed this chapter. Neji's angst, Kakashi, Gaara, and now Hinata, everyone was really in character. Gaara and Naruto talking about accidentally eating people was hilarious. I hope we have more of them interacting. Hinata had tough choices to make, but losing her tongue like that? Ow. What did she even get in return, anyway? Just waking up from the coma? Seems like there should be more.
| Snowyh2o chapter 18 . 4/15
ummm, I'm kinda confused. I'm pretty sure the guy Hinata was talking is Greed and Ling, but Greed doesn't have power over shadows, that's Pride's ability, and Ling isn't an alchemist, though he probably passed through the gate, and Greed could've absorbed Pride and gained his ability(unlikely but still possible). Either that or it's another human/homunculus hybrid with Pride instead and someone vaguely matching Ling's description(also unlikely).
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter! No really can't wait, what happened to Ed and Hinata and who visited her and made the Al figures?! Too many questions!
| Marie chapter 18 . 4/14
And what's been happening to Ed while this transpired?
| Tony chapter 18 . 4/14
Very very very awesome story so far!
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/10
Omg I love how you write Gaara XD
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/8
Greatly enjoying this story, and Ed's interaction with the Leaf villagers. Not sure about our 'Mysterious Stranger' TM from the latest chapters, and where you're going with that. Please do continue writing, however, as I'd like to see where you can take this! (Preferably getting the next chapter out before next year)
| Nathanel chapter 18 . 4/5
The story should probably be M. Removed tongues, paralysis, and large amounts of blood will push the T rating to it's limits. Just make it M to be safe.
| Evinco chapter 18 . 4/5
| lumutness chapter 18 . 4/3
Oh, well, keep the profanities as xx, please. I may be okay with stabbing and torturing in a story, but not with profanities. Hm, wonder why.
I proudly declare myself a shipper for AnkoxEd since several
| The Halfa Wannabe chapter 18 . 4/3
I kinda like the self censorship. Seems to fit with Edward somehow, but given the horrible death by partial deconstruction I agree it sgould be mature.
| The Halfa Wannabe chapter 2 . 4/1
I was thinking you made him more childish and less insane in the first chapter. But this made up for it. I can totally see Naruto tasting himself after he was told that.
| guest chapter 18 . 3/23
Well, the last rated M fic I stumbled across was essentially torture-porn and had a graphic description of a main character being skinned alive. And strait up porn is kinda common in the M section (even though nc-17 type stories are technically not allowed on the site. I think just gave up trying to stop people from posting them.) Point is, I really don't think a little profanity or gore is bad enough for that label.
I suspect you will get different answers, since different people have different ideas about what things should be rated. Like, a movie can be rated pg-13 in one country, and R in another because of different cultural ideas about what is acceptable at what age.
I think this story is perfectly fine at a T rating though. There's nothing in it that wouldn't be in the original mangas-both of which are marketed toward adolescents, and there's nothing I wouldn't see in a pg-13 rated movie in America... So I say you're solid.
| katsekala chapter 18 . 3/19
You had me curious about the unknown man. Great chapter! Many kisses!