Reviews for The Truth Decays
The Halfa Wannabe chapter 2 . 4/1
I was thinking you made him more childish and less insane in the first chapter. But this made up for it. I can totally see Naruto tasting himself after he was told that.
guest chapter 18 . 3/23
Well, the last rated M fic I stumbled across was essentially torture-porn and had a graphic description of a main character being skinned alive. And strait up porn is kinda common in the M section (even though nc-17 type stories are technically not allowed on the site. I think just gave up trying to stop people from posting them.) Point is, I really don't think a little profanity or gore is bad enough for that label.
I suspect you will get different answers, since different people have different ideas about what things should be rated. Like, a movie can be rated pg-13 in one country, and R in another because of different cultural ideas about what is acceptable at what age.
I think this story is perfectly fine at a T rating though. There's nothing in it that wouldn't be in the original mangas-both of which are marketed toward adolescents, and there's nothing I wouldn't see in a pg-13 rated movie in America... So I say you're solid.
katsekala chapter 18 . 3/19
You had me curious about the unknown man. Great chapter! Many kisses!
StabittyStabby chapter 18 . 3/17
Is there such a thing as a high T rating? If there isn't it should probably be rated M. The word censoring is a bit annoying. Other than that I liked this story and will be waiting for the next chapter. Ed makes me laugh, Naruto is hilariously oblivious to everything, Sasuke is an emo turd, and Gai is full of youth. My favorite part so far was when Naruto talked about accidentally eating the sound ninja. All in all this story is serious yet has its moments of humor, well written and enjoyable while being realistic in its deaths and having consideration for the characters. I liked reading this story.

llat-2 chapter 13 . 3/17
Danzo's 'support' and a kunai in the back are pretty much the same thing.
TheHaloFreak chapter 17 . 3/15
Please update! I need MOAR! Now that I've started watching Naruto this story makes more sense but I still amusingly lost with the Naruto stuff. I still want more!
Adelheidi36 chapter 18 . 3/14
nah you're good I've seen worse in books rated T and the profanity sensor might still be a good Idea
Yeh chapter 18 . 3/9
Hey, just commenting so let you know what you already know, your story is awesome, and I'm so excited for the upcomings. But take your time, it's your life and we can't make you do anything. I don't think the profanities should make it M, but maybe for graphic descriptions? But I've seen pretty bad stuff under M anyways so don't fret too much about it. .
Ryuken-Sogetsu chapter 18 . 3/3
PRIDE! I'm so happy he's the other one!
Guest chapter 17 . 2/27
If you're going to use the word "fuck", use it. If you don't want to use it, don't. The whole adding "xx" thing, when we all know what it means, is pointless and distracting to the reader, especially when we just fill it in as "fuck" in our heads anyway. If someone is going to get offended by the word, they're going to be offended regardless of if you throw "xx" in or not. Language is not a reason to get a story removed on this site, so just write the word if you really need to. And you don't need too, because neither Naruto or FMA used that word in canon. Either way, it will help your story flow better without unneeded censorship.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/27
Um. Yeah. Actually, the Hokage can tell the Council to fuck off whenever he or she wants. The idea that the Council has power over the Hokage is 100% pure fanon. The Fire Daimyo is the only one who can make the Hokage do anything. The council is there to offer advice and help the Hokage out, and that's pretty much it.
Battlesny chapter 18 . 2/25
if stabbings mean it should be rated M then almost every anime/manga I have ever watched should be.
Battlesny chapter 15 . 2/25
YAY! 10% puppies :)
wolfly chapter 18 . 2/25
Waaaah I'm so happy you're still writing this!
Battlesny chapter 6 . 2/25
there was a train in one of the movies, in country of snow, but I think that was af advanced as they get. well, except for everyday stuff like tv, lightbulbs, wireless fit in ear radios, stoves,fridges, and other useless junk like that.
either guns don't exist or kunai are just stronger when used by a ninja.
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