Reviews for The Child of his Father
authorette22 chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
I have read this story before, but never reviewed it. I like the concept, but in reading the story I think one from Charlie's pov would be good. Maybe one in which he writes a letter to his mother/father after realizing what happened.
XfallenstarO chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
good idea!

well written!
AnneGirl15 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Good story, but I didn't like the rape part. I don't think that would be put in a BSC book, sorry :( ~Anne please r/r my work! THANKS!
Nara Vine chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
You alternate between Edie and Eddie - which one is it?
Hen21 chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Oh, Charlie would never turn out like Patrick. He's too nice!
cpennylane chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
I love this! it's dark, and well written. I like Charlie fics.
Epitome of Randomness chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Wow. I love Patrick fics and this is a great one. The end line was fantastic.
MuseUrania chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Wow. This is well written. :)
Yutolia chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
This is a very well written story. Great job!
oh chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
thats not very nice

it made me sad that you sed he was rapist. i had a guinee pig called patrick but he died
Andrea P. Quintell chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Dark, but very well written. Really interesting concept!