Reviews for Revelations
river-moonlight chapter 2 . 5/13
After the AMAZING amount of Hal and Kyle interactions from "Hal and the GLC", I totally went and re-read this. Omg, I miss your fics so much. xD Would totally have wanted to see your opinions/takes on them set in the current comics. 3
GoldenChildofApollo chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
LOVE IT, please write another one i live Kyle/Hal
David-El chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
Not bad, but there is one thing I'm DYING to know: What's old Sin think about this? And what about the Guardians?
totallyPSYCHED chapter 2 . 3/7/2011
Aw cute

And hilarious

The kitchen scene had me bending over laughing xD lol poor guys, and bats and supes were there too,

They must have developed an irrational fear of kitchens from that xD
nequam-tenshi chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
haha! He should make it a hundred!
SwordMasterZ chapter 2 . 11/22/2010
oh man no privasy with these two
Annie chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I laughed, SO HARD.
Sherrri chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
Ha, this was awesome. I love how everyone was betting on them, and the end with them living together was kind of cute XD
Jacey chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Perfect. It was perfect in everyway. I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thought Kyle and Hal would be great. I wish they were teamed more together in the comics. You should definitly write more.