Reviews for The Dangers Of Boredom
Taranea chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Heh, nice, I found myself smiling at quite a bit of this. (And I DO wonder why Robotnik hasn't moved his base out into the ocean since forever . )

A few of the sentences could be shortened or cut in half to increase impact, and maybe the ending line could have a sense of conclusion, a new idea or something - but all in all, good work!

Taranea:)