Very cute!
I would have loved to know something about Franks reaction to Alice winning the competition!

Really enjoyed this story. There were times I found it frustrating but I think that was more directed at the characters than the writing. I was confused about a couple of aspects, but overall a really great idea and a fun fic

wow! Sometimes the marouders didn't act like they should but all in all still good story

i dont like lucille, not many do. But it puts people in perspective.I like Lily, but she's...definitely not my favourrite. She has reasons for not liking James and the compeition, but i can't help but think that she's slightly close minded, she'll accept people, but she doesnt see the grey area in between. The comp is a little... like being a sex toy, but Lily could have said everything in a more kinder way. I dont dislike her for having morals, no way, but she is a lilttle bitchy and rude, and she thinks she is better than some people, and in a way she doesnt want to understand why somebody does what they do just because it means she'll be wrong. sorry for thr rant, its is great story, and i like that you showed Lily from a point that doesnt make her seem like a queen. Lovely chapter, and had to review on this one.

i was supposed to be studying, i really was. but then i remembered this story, and i had to read it and then i couldn't stop reading. this is really amazing, and you are a wonderful author. it couldn't have been easy getting into the heads of the ten girls like that, but you did an amazing job!

I like Verity

I love love love love love this so much! I heard about this story on some website where people post suggestions about what to read but I never thought it would be so good! The first chapter I was a bit uncertain but it just kept getting better and better! Kinda wish you had added a part in where we get to see the July relationship a bit more but the bigger part of me loves how you finished it. You have us an opportunity to imagine what would happen next instead of telling us your way of thinking. Over all just really loved the writing and the idea. Your OC were great too. And the way you managed to write from all the different perspectives of the girls. Your talented.

This was the best story I have ever read. You are truly an amazing writer and you concluded the story very well. I would definitely recommend this story to someone else. Bravo!

I like how their personalities changed so much.

If you read this please tell me if you're a miracle worker cause this is bloody brilliant!

oh, shit. Stop making me feel guilty. There's this boy in my school, and he does a lot of what James does to Lily - yanno fawning over her, repeatedly asking her out, making loud proclamations of affection, and I treat him pretty shittily for it. Reading this is making me slightly more sympathetic to the guy that's hitting me. Ugh.

holy crow. i really thought alicia was gonna go. dammit, i liked verity. really well written tho :)

I WANT MORE. GIMME MORE. I NEED MORE.

I think Lucile will be out this time. One question though, why can't you have a chapter where they actually go outside classes, the Room of Requirement, or Hogwarts in general. I really love Verity and her quiet personality to everyone else, but a total Amazon in her brain. Good job.

I just love this story, it is pure genius. I like how it's not as cliché as most stories, because they always let Lily win every competition. This is definitely my favorite story on this website. Keep writing, please.