Reviews for Edwards Control
Cassandra chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
You used a good choice of words for this. It is safe and I like it. I was waiting for this to happen in the books. I was disappointed when they had nothing in the books about the intimacy. It was nerve racking. But this story would have been perfect in the book somewhere.
stacey chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
that was realy gd if u do some day become a writer il bye your books
Brittany1224 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! i enjoyed reading this.
Kaylie chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
I noticed a few grammical errors but the story was well done, nothing compared to your other story, the thirst for midnight sun but definitely a fun read. thanks for writing as always i loved it.

-Kaylie
xXx Amy Scott Luvs DA's xXx chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
Bella is a sneaky one!

I like it! xD

Edward is really cute in this...

you never really hear how it is for him in these moments.

Great chappy!

Amelia Cullen
Cristina S chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
I can see that this is old but i hope you can still get this message...I love your stories. this was so cute, i could relate
Your sweetest dream chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
that's really cute :)
unknown chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Three words ( well...5) L. O. L.
bellaklutz2010 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
This was good
123iluvzac chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
hehe! ;D evil bella :P
GroovyExcel chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
hahahahahaha! GO BELLA!
DillPicklez chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
lol love it! well written and bella finally wins!
twilightrocs chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
that was good.
Emiliana Keladry chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Tricky Bella... she finally did win. Poor Edward, he lost. Great job with this!

Emma
blueyblonde chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
i love it
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