|Reviews for Edwards Control|
| harryandjamesluvr chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
ur right i do love ur other stories!
| Do Not Even Try chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
You were absolutely right-I DID enjoy this. Once again, your writing style is so refreshing to read! It's so very descriptive, but simple at the same time. Somehow you can make the simplest sentences paint the grandest picture in the readers mind. Wonderful job! I'm off to go read your other work ]
| CTaylor0806 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Very good ! I loved it!
| StacyM chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
| Sly Roxx chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Hahaha, I loved it! Especially the end where he asks himself if he could do anything right. So sweet.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Just wanted to let you know, the word "which" is spelled w-h-i-c-h not w-i-t-c-h. Unless you're talking about the kind that ride broomsticks. It was very distracting.
| blueeyesandliterature chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
| jazbabe621 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
very cute ]
| NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
| breazoocullen chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
OMG I loved it! :] Totally adorable and lovely.
| not dead yet chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
| hot 101 chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
This was such a cute oneshot!.I am all about the fluff lol:).If you don't write fluffy stories very often you really should start because this was CRAZY fun to read!.Oh and it really helped that it was in Edwards POV I just love reading his thoughts!.Write more soon please.
| VampiraBonita chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
that was good it was cute none the less! i loved it!