|Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: Darkness Returns|
| Kasperow chapter 7 . 4/23/2008
Still an interesting story. Keep up the good job.
| Kasperow chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Well, It's a good story, but I noticed a fatal error: In the prologue, it's written in third person. Chapter 1 is written in first person and the rest is written in third person. Stick with either first person, or third person. If you don't, you might end with confusing the readers. Also I've favorited this story as the only story so far.