Reviews for That Was My Siblings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SO FUNNY! Loved the 117 Year Old Virgin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "You guys are going to get it!" Edward shouts. "But I'm not," mutters Bella. |
![]() ![]() I honestly don't know whether to laugh or be disgusted. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE IT. |
![]() ![]() Oh my god...i ws laughing so hard that my cheeks are still hurting... Good riddance by the siblings! Good job ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, that was hilarious. Poor Edward - always being taunted for being a virgin :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my! I got hysteric reading that! lol, I can't believe that they did it! I was laughing so hard, especially, imagining the video that they shoot! That was awesome! Thank you!)) |
![]() ![]() AstheDear Fan fiction, for whatever reason, will not let me sign in as myself. Anyway, I just wanted to point out the grammatical error in your title. You have a clear pronoun antecedent disagreement and subject verb disagreement. I realize the title is probably in answer to Bella's question at the end, "What was that." And Edwards responds "that was..." Although it may seem correct due to the parallel use, because the antecedent (siblings) is plural the pronoun that refers to it and the verb following also need to be plural. The title should be, "Those Were My Siblings". |
![]() ![]() Fan fiction, for whatever reason, will not let me sign in as myself. Anyway, I just wanted to point out the grammatical error in your title. You have a clear pronoun antecedent disagreement. I realize the title is probably in answer to Bella's question at the end, "What was that." And Edwards responds "that was..." Although it may seem correct due to the parallel use, because the antecedent (siblings) is pural |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I couldn't stop laughing |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha that's soooo funny! Just the thought of Emmett trying to be a girl makes me... *shudders* Keep up the great work! :) (: Tarah xXx |
![]() ![]() ![]() SOOOOOO FUNNY! WRITE A 2ND ONE PLEASE! PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() OMG! So funny! I laughed my head off! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAAAOOOOOOOO... Loved this. Was smiling throughout the entire fic. ;) |