Reviews for That Was My Siblings
Spidersauce chapter 1 . 9/3/2020
"You guys are going to get it!" Edward shouts.
"But I'm not," mutters Bella.
DiscreetFrog11 chapter 1 . 3/25/2020
I honestly don't know whether to laugh or be disgusted.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
I LOVE IT.
twifreakzee chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Oh my god...i ws laughing so hard that my cheeks are still hurting... Good riddance by the siblings! Good job !
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Ha, that was hilarious. Poor Edward - always being taunted for being a virgin :)
Karsata chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Oh my! I got hysteric reading that! lol, I can't believe that they did it! I was laughing so hard, especially, imagining the video that they shoot! That was awesome! Thank you!))
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
AstheDear
Fan fiction, for whatever reason, will not let me sign in as myself.
Anyway, I just wanted to point out the grammatical error in your title.
You have a clear pronoun antecedent disagreement and subject verb disagreement.
I realize the title is probably in answer to Bella's question at the end, "What was that." And Edwards responds "that was..."
Although it may seem correct due to the parallel use, because the antecedent (siblings) is plural the pronoun that refers to it and the verb following also need to be plural.

The title should be, "Those Were My Siblings".
AstheDear chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Fan fiction, for whatever reason, will not let me sign in as myself.
Anyway, I just wanted to point out the grammatical error in your title.
You have a clear pronoun antecedent disagreement. I realize the title is probably in answer to Bella's question at the end, "What was that." And Edwards responds "that was..."
Although it may seem correct due to the parallel use, because the antecedent (siblings) is pural
cheesytan93 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Haha
Naomi M chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I couldn't stop laughing
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
hahahaha that's soooo funny! Just the thought of Emmett trying to be a girl makes me... *shudders*
Keep up the great work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
ILoveSiriusBlack4 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
SOOOOOO FUNNY!
WRITE A 2ND ONE PLEASE!
PLEASE!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
OMG! So funny! I laughed my head off!
Vividly'xD chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
LMAAAOOOOOOOO...
Loved this. Was smiling throughout the entire fic. ;)
bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Very funny. Oh how I would love to see Edward's punishment for them! Great job!
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