Reviews for Christmas in Toyland
pmaniac chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
I used to work at the Disney Store and it was murder at Christmastime; I can honestly sympathise with Doyle. This is like therapy. I loved it.
wuemsel chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Aw! Loved the ending! Of COURSE he opens the gift! And how neat of you to just sneakily weave in the hurt. :D

Left me feeling very christmassy, this. Can't wait for snow. :D
SupernaturalGeek chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
That was really well done. You had Bodie & Doyle completely in character and the dialogue could have been from an episode - I was laughing out loud at so many of the lines! I also liked how you wrote Murphy, and his new partner.

I really enjoyed reading this - great job :)
e-pony chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Always enjoy your fic, Vermi, whether Pros or S&H. The banter always rings true, and even the side characters are developed. And then there's the sense of humor that comes through even in your more serious stories. Thanks for a good read and for making beta reading fun.

Pony
Lisa Paris chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Great story. Chuckled over all of it, but especially enjoyed the ending.