Reviews for Grudge Match |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, I was expecting Kirby to eat it. |
![]() ![]() i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Mario accent. Andross is the victor. Kirby is running for his life. What would you do for a klondike bar? Play Super Smash Brawl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() f* yeay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was real funny. I liked the ending, and Crazy Hand. Thank you for using real grammer and spelling too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that was a great fanfic! The greatest rivalry continues with an ice-cream bar! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahahahahahaha! That's funny. A fight over ice-cream? Well, I suppose it's better than a fight over you know, something important. The battle scene was awesomely described, that was quite good. And the careful rivalry/friendship of Mario and Sonic was...different, but still pretty cool. Go Sonic! Thanks for posting this was funny AND exciting! Keep writing! Liz |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so amusing. Poor guys!...I really like this Mario and Sonic-centric stuff, and this was really well-written, particularly the battle scene. Great job!... |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. The battle was excellent and well detailed, but when Andross KO'ed them both...XD You might want to clean up a bit of Crazy Hand's lines, and add a bit more, like, Instead of this: "“Am not!”the fidgeting glove responded indignantly." You should have this: "“Am not!” The fidgeting glove responded indignantly, glaring at Mario." But other than that, it was excellent indeed! :D And poor Mario and Sonic...never actually got to share the last Klondike bar. :( XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Utter greatness. That's all I can say. I personally liked the fic. The detail was amazing, as was the... ah crap, I forgot the word... Execution, that was it! Yeah, the exectution of the battle was also great. It gets a 11 out of ten from me. I added a point because you got the character's personalities, perfect. Also cause you had Sonic in it. ( Not better than shadow though... Sonic's still good.) Anyway, good job. |