|Reviews for Two Years|
| Alandria chapter 12 . 8/11/2010
Awwwn, so cute! You did a great job, here! Characters discovering their own feelings are the best! Also, everyone feels in-character, I guess Misora can be somewhat aggressive, heh. Thanks for this!
| EVA-02 chapter 12 . 8/23/2008
Really good. I enjoyed reading this.
The fight with the virus could be improved, though. He was next to invincible in the beginning, but Rockman and Harp Note easily beat him in their next encounter.
| Niilan chapter 12 . 4/4/2008
So whatever happened to the virus? I mean, he was invincible, then all the sudden he was destroyed. I was half-expecting you to bring him in again... Well, I think that was good to bring in Misora at the very end.
| Niilan chapter 11 . 4/4/2008
EVIL Misora! She thinks she's all that... (that's what you want the audience to feel *wink*)
| Niilan chapter 10 . 4/4/2008
What's with the virus? Seriously, Subaru needs to get a clue. *sigh* boys...
| Niilan chapter 9 . 4/4/2008
I'm confused about the viruses analysis. What exactly was he saying? Also, the constant running into Subaru is a little repetitive. You should mix it up a bit.
| Niilan chapter 8 . 4/4/2008
Nice change, we had some action. I see something interesting in the future...
| Niilan chapter 7 . 4/4/2008
What did War-Rock feel? You have to admit, luna can't seem to get her feelings straight.
| Niilan chapter 6 . 4/3/2008
Hmm... did Luna rig the results?
| Niilan chapter 5 . 4/3/2008
Poor Luna and Subaru... neither knows how to communicate. (The only one that does isn't polite!)
| Niilan chapter 3 . 4/1/2008
O.O Uh-oh. What's she doing? Good job. (Watch switching point of view within scenes).
| Niilan chapter 2 . 4/1/2008
Both Luna and Misora are a bit (slight understatement) possessive of Subaru. I still prefer Luna over Misora, though. Luna at least has some warranted symapthy.
| Niilan chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
T.T m, poor Luna! Evil Misora! She knows no bonds...
| Captain Deadpool chapter 12 . 3/3/2008
A very strong finish to a very good story. The best thing about this fan fiction, in my opinion, is the fact that you didn't rush things, but you didn't drag either. Your timing for most things was marvelous. I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future, if you decide to continue writing fan fiction.
| Lost Phantasm chapter 12 . 3/3/2008
The final chapter was well written. Misora's thoughts at the end was a plus.
Though you could have described more about the "feeling" that Luna had been dreaming for years...
A . Added to my favs.