Augh! How could Misora! That's just... Argh! (Sorry, getting a little worked up. But still!) Anyway, I love this story, and I really can't wait until the next chapter.

That kiss was a masterful bit of story telling. I didn't see it coming! I love surprises.

...And yet another great chapter.

The attention rivalry scenes were nicely written.

Excellent writing from Luna's perspective so far.

Some sentences (and paragraphs) tell me that there's going to be a whole load of character development coming up.

Funny thing about Misora-chan there. I honestly don't get how she can have time for school, homework, and her profession...

Overall: Well written, with many colorful details. The storyline has become a little bit clearer from this chapter, and a bit of Subaru's feelings for Luna have been revealed... Some things are still a little bit unclear, such as why Misora goes to school but still has time for her job.

Subaru is the classic example of a smart guy who is as sensitive as reinforced titanium female emotion. The result is very cute. Also, I must say that I love the rivalry going on here.

A bit of an error. "Daisuke" is a name. "Daisuki" is the term you're looking for :P

Another fine chapter! A bit on the slow side for my tastes, but still very good. I've already started the third chapter on mine, but it'll be sometime next week before I can post it.

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woa...love your story so much...

I've been waiting for a very long time looking for an [L x S] fanfic

however

UPDATE SOON!

thanks

Another excellent chapter! The fight scene was short, but I liked it. It was also a good S/L moment.

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