Reviews for I don't need heaven
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Nicely done.
thefiretree chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Short but incredibly sweet. I love his last words to her before he bites her. It's SO Edward. And even if this may be short, I think you wrote the characters as if you had come up with them yourself. Great job. ;D
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
this is one of the best I've read good job! _
Eillac chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Amazing. You to a cliqued and overused plot and turned it into a beautiful, heart-touching story.

Cullenista chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
I've read a lot of these and this one is very good. You have an insight into Edward's character that a lot of writers miss. And the line, "As his teeth sank into my neck, I only felt relief." is both original and telling. Great commentary on Bella's part. Excellent.
Rosegirl chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
ok macke it a little bit more interasting if you can other than that i love it and you should tottaly right more.


p.s. and yes that is my real name.
Twinkling chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Beautifully written! Good job.
notmagnificent chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Oh, that was so beutiful. Very short, like my own writing style.
DramaticStarlet chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Wow, that was so amazing. So descriptive and beautiful and perfect.

I could picture the whole thing so vividly...

I think I'm going to go read Eclipse now for the 800th time