Reviews for Comatose
the Prince's Jewel chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
The small on Riku's face was smile, - while you said every word was carefully picked and chosen, I have to wonder if the word order here was actually what you meant to happen...

Aside from that, I liked it.
elvenangel3 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
I enjoyed that a lot. The sex scene was amazing. Dark and twisty and hot and everything. Those two do go rather well together I methinks ;). Nice story.
No-Chan chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
That. Was. Effing. Amazing.

Long and with a pointed plot that made sense. I applaud.
Allaizabel chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Very good. :D Very in character
Kitty-Cat-Kauri chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
it's great!


written great