Reviews for Bella The Punk Goth
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Why does it always have to be some "slutty" girl who wants the boyfriend?
cannamuff chapter 14 . 11/1/2011

Oh my...

How flattering is it to search myself on the internets in order to find a school assignment and to come across someone else featuring an old story of mine...


Shank juu very much~3

For reading and mentioning it and all that jazz.

Even if my writing style as a middle schooler was quite...lacking...and even if it WAS a Twilight fanfiction ;

Oh, memories. XD

By the way, HELLO~3
xxFarahxx chapter 4 . 9/25/2011
This is so weird. Okay don't take this the wrong way this is constructive critism. This story is written sooo poorly. And like it doesn't flow smoothley, some time it doesn't even make sense. I mean it is a good STORYLINE. But the writing is bad. Work on that. For example the way you were describing what they were wearing is just redundant like I felt SO bored. And these random songs in the middle of the chapter are just annoying and they don't make sense. And the boys? They're like bellas bitches. And charlie? Does he have no personality ? "Oh they came with me because of what we did," "oh okay then" ? wtf? I'm sorry and please do not take this the wrong way and get upset I'm just trying to help.
but chapter 22 . 4/15/2011
this is my fav story keep going and if u need help writing just tell me but i dont have a account on here
nyla chapter 4 . 2/23/2011
i really like the story. i suggest that u make each chapter a little bit longer though. thanx ;}
rochelle chapter 20 . 12/7/2009
i love that you made bella a punk them storys a the best do some more and i like the ones that bella get aboused i know that i bad but it more belivabel and that edwared saves her our finds out and helps(might kill the person our people) and it wholud be good if it her bofried and mum not dad coz thats deep
starlighttauriel chapter 19 . 11/25/2009
Where is the rest of your story?
newyorkers chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
i think the guys are a little too followy with bella i mean theyd be a bit more independent at least
newyorkers chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
haha i LOVE all of their last names especially Cal Comatose! lmao. man i wanna bitch slap lauren and jessica.
newyorkers chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
i like how theyre all fighting for bellas attention its so funny!
newyorkers chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
haha emmett. but i have to say its kinda weird how you number best friends, like first second and third. It would have been better to just say theyre all my best friends maybe?
dangerous sam chapter 20 . 2/3/2009
i lied it alot!

i like all the new peole hell i just loved the story i cant wait to read more!
LunaEclipse94 chapter 19 . 12/7/2008
i hate cliff hangers
Bookbat4ever chapter 19 . 11/29/2008

think of all the agony your causeing me by waiting to put up another chapeter!

: (

IM SAD NOW... : (
Bookbat4ever chapter 18 . 11/29/2008
that was fantabules! can't wait to read more : )
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