Reviews for The Afterthoughts
vodkaholic chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
This was absolutely perfect! I don't remember her name, either.. Though I must admit I love her name. Its nice to see Draco so.. humanly? It was very fitting and such!
julia chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Wow, I don't even remember her name being mentioned.. I loved this, though! It was wonderful! I love the whole idea of this!
Gaby Black chapter 4 . 6/8/2008
Nice update!

- Gaby
Padfootgirlforever chapter 4 . 6/7/2008
Haha, I love this. I think you're gradually making me hate the epilogue less:)
meraki13 chapter 4 . 6/7/2008
That was really good. I like their reactions to Luna and how Art hoped that she wasn't some daydreamer. :) Boy, will they be in for a shock.
lyin chapter 4 . 6/6/2008
loved this- my favorite so far, i think. especially the 'memory was returning to him with the force of a small, brilliant yellow coloured explosion' and the gramophone's 'regurgitating bird calls'. i can't remember if Newt's son Art is mentioned somewhere in canon and you dredged it up from his 'dedication' or some such, but the name fits canon perfectly, as does Junetta. lovely. love the image of how rolf and luna met and his parents being worried. just a great, pleasant, very in-character little scene. thanks for this! :D
fancy-a-biscuit chapter 4 . 6/6/2008
Haha, poor Luna. We have to love her. Liked how it was from the parent pov, it worked well :)

hannahannah chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
oh, i just wish it went on a litle bit farther.

nice work using really small characters.
digificwriter chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
Great update. It was interesting to see Rolf's family's thoughts on Luna, even if it deviated from the formula.

Suggestion: since you've already deviated once, why not give us a chapter from Rolf's POV that is an accompaniment or addendum to this one?
Musafreen chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
That, was fun.

Good job.
Jess.91 chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
Well they're bound to love Luna, I'm sure. I liked this one. Great chapter.
Violin Ghost chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
Yay, Luna!

Yes, this chapter was in a different style from the others. I'm not sure which I like better, but this one was definitely entertaining.

(I wish we could have seen Luna and Rolf in it, though.)

Lovely! Thanks for a pleasant surprise. :)
FinnFiona chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Nice to see an update! This is a fun little twist in the format... at least Rolf does seems happy with Luna-even if his family isn't exactly pleased :)
sophia666 chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Great writing. I love this story, I feel a bit sorry for the Scamanders, but I'm sure they end up loving update soon.
mustardgirl1128 chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Hahaha! That was great-I loved Newt and his craziness. I want a grandpa like him! The end was great. I loved how they all wanted Rolf to find a girl, and how the fortune was the reason most girls liked him. Great job, this was great! I'm very glad for the update!
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