Reviews for The Afterthoughts
MBP chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
I liked this a lot! Luna and her nargles... I'd bet she could win anyone over, and I hope I'm right. If not, though... well, this Rolf fellow had better stand up for her. She's awesome.
silliana chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
This is cute. It's amusing to think of the wizarding world being just as confused about JK's family trees as anyone else...
Lola-LessThanThree chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Cute. I loved it
Heart4Happiness chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Once again, brilliant, especially the last part.

Thanks for the lol-age. :)
Dodger Gilmore chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
I'm still enjoying this story. Even if you left me a bit curious to how the actual meeting between Rolf's parents and Luna is going to go... But it was another good chapter, and I'd love to read more!
Illyra chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
I definitely like your story. Its marvellous how you bring 'light' into two characters we only know by name or the different POVs of Angelina and Luna. Especially the last chapter was fantastic. To choose Rolfs father as the person which thoughts we hear. Wonderful!
FranCheesecake chapter 4 . 6/4/2008




Art swore.

lmao. this chapter actually made me laugh just a little. Quite good usual. ]]
The Seamonkey chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
LOL. Love this last one. XD They're all really good, actually. I look forward to more. :)

higher than sky high chapter 2 . 5/24/2008
wow, this is really interesting take on astoria... of course we don't know anything about her so anything goes i guess. x) i think it does a good job explaining their relationship... though i like to imagine her as blonde b/c it seems to be a trend in the malfoy family.. x)
larabrambleofbywater chapter 3 . 5/18/2008
Wow, this is really good. I never really thought about them like that before. Thanks for the great read!
Violin Ghost chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
Oh, forgot to say- in the third chapter, there's a typo:

"And after they’d all had finished laughing about that"

I'm not sure if anyone's pointed it out yet. Anyway, thanks for a lovely read! :)
Violin Ghost chapter 3 . 5/4/2008
I read this before, but never got around to reviewing. That said, I think these were wonderful insights into JK Rowling's vague "afterthoughts". And Luna/Rolf would be wonderful! :)
obsessedmum chapter 3 . 4/26/2008
I LOVE this one. I love George and Angelina's relationship, and am so happy that they got married. You explained it so well. I also agree with that poster who said Angelina is like Molly. George married someone who he loved and who was like his mother. I hope you continue this. Wonderful job!
obsessedmum chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
I'm glad that Pansy didn't get Draco in the end. He needed someone soft and not such a female dog. Astoria probably was a kind person. I would hate to think that Scorpius turned out to be horrible. Great job.
obsessedmum chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I really like this. You gave us insight into a character that we know nothing about. I think she fit with Percy better than Penelope. Great job:)
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