Reviews for Innocence Is What We Make It
sarloos chapter 11 . 4/20/2008
Me likie *grins*
Autunm Lilac chapter 10 . 4/18/2008
Leichendiener is the German -I think- name for a person who works in a morgue and cleans and takes care of the bodies. The literal translation is "The Corpse Servant". In the beginning when I had just started to write this fanfic, I was going to have it be Allen. However, a part of the way though the oneshot, I felt it would make more sense for the Leichendiener to be Tykki, as he "took care" of the bodies of those he killed by not hurting them physically. All he did was remove an organ. 3 They looked perfectly healthy, but they were dead. Twisted logic, but it works. And the black side is the one teasing his white side, because the one thing Tykki's white side loves the most is his "family". So I felt that that was a good thing for the black side to be threatening the white side with. Heehee. Actually, in America, the diener is the one to take care of the bodies. It's just an abbreviation of Leichendiener, but eh. Whatever works.
pika318 chapter 10 . 4/17/2008
Huh? I don't really get this one. Can you explain? Who is this Leichendiener?
Akky-chan chapter 10 . 4/16/2008
*shiver* that is so creepy...

*write the idea down*
sarloos chapter 10 . 4/13/2008
one word for the "Musician" ... WOOT.
sarloos chapter 9 . 4/13/2008
I LIKE chapter nine, very very very much. :) Lovely line with the destroyer and silver lining bit.
Tuli-Susi chapter 9 . 4/2/2008
This is so amazing! This stream of consciousness, right? I like it better than most stories WITH plots! Yeah... I don't really know what to say, but it's very intriguing. I'm not sure who you're referring to within each chapter though... then again, it works for pretty much anyone, at least, I [ersonally think so...

So, yeah, loved it and I really hope you write more!
akky-chan chapter 9 . 3/25/2008
PWNED!... *looks around* sorry, had to say that ;
pika318 chapter 9 . 3/25/2008
I think I just made a habit of guessing which part you are referring to. Let me see...this chapter refers to the part where Allen decides to help Lala and Gozul fufuill their promise to each other.
Autunm Lilac chapter 8 . 3/18/2008
Yeah, I know that some people might get offended. They're allowed. It's their opinion, and that... isn't quite mine, but it worked, and I needed something dramatic to end the text. xP And yep! It's Allen-kun talking to the innocence. I'm just surprised I haven't gotten flamed yet by any anonymous critiques. D I feel very loved.
pika318 chapter 8 . 3/18/2008
Let me guess. This chapter is the part where Allen used his innocence to force himself to move after he was badly beaten up by the level 4 akuma. Just like a puppet. Good description and I don't mind the last line since I have no religion :)
addenza chapter 8 . 3/18/2008
Cool :)
IOTR chapter 8 . 3/18/2008
I loved this one. But it may be a bit offending to some.

"Fools trust god."

Yeah.
addenza chapter 7 . 3/14/2008
Cool. Reflects Lenalee's mixed feelings towards the "god".. :D
saloos chapter 7 . 3/13/2008
THOSE WERE AWESOME! You write angst very well :)
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