Reviews for Slave Driven
kasey chapter 9 . 12/5/2013
More :) and have ed get into trouble. Some torture time is necessary I think :P
Dragon the Antihero chapter 9 . 7/14/2013
PLZ continue this is really good I want to know what hapens next! :D
tahiri13 chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
I really hope you finish it I am really enjoying this
Kt chapter 9 . 5/15/2013
Plz write more, something about Aden's girlfriend? :)
triforcepwnage chapter 9 . 10/1/2012
Holy crap this is great. You've got to finish it so I can om-nom the fluff.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/8/2012
i sad...
you no post for four year..
i want to know what happen to edo-kun..
do alphonse-kun and winry-chan and others find him? do he die?
i need to know!
XxSpiritWolfxX chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
UPDATA
BlackHayate13 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Ohkay, Yeah. Could you PLEASEPLEASPLEASEPLEAAAASE continue? Its killing me. D: It just was sort of... dropped. D: Preases?
TailsMoon chapter 9 . 7/12/2010
Awesome! I think Ed is a little OOC, but it's fine. I hope you'll update
Angel21217 chapter 9 . 7/11/2010
Upload PLZ.
Angel21217 chapter 5 . 7/11/2010
Ling and Ran Fan/Lan Fan really need to hook up in this.
BlackHayate13 chapter 9 . 7/2/2010
Please, I beg of you, Update! *hangshead* Its too good to abandon.
BlackHayate13 chapter 8 . 7/2/2010
Yaaay Cliff hangers! :D
BlackHayate13 chapter 7 . 7/2/2010
My current knowledge of slave situations resulted in this:

When the word lust came up after Alexis. "Called it."

When Ed went into Aden's room. "Ohfuckhe'sgonnagetcaughtiknowit*crai*"

Actually, right from the start i predicted these things:

There will be either a female resident, The slaver her/himself is female, There is a female that is close with the slavemaster.

The last one was obviously correct, however i didn't expect Aden to be ok with it, bringing up the manipulation factor. I thought from the start that she'd try something and it'd end up like the story in the bible(I didn't read it, Social Studies.) about the guy that was made a slave and the slaveman's wife had a thing for him and when he didn't oblige she claimed rape. But i guess Aden would be pretty cool with it... suprisingly enough...

I'm going to guess that the Alchemist's name comes from being able to impersonate others? I wouldn't know, I'm not familiar with the term Doppleganger other then in Tombraider. And she was a duplicate of Lara, so thats where my thoughts came from. If i'm wrong, Tell me what you mean by it please. :P

-BlackHayate133
BlackHayate13 chapter 6 . 7/2/2010
*nodnod* I could picture this, I slightly considered looking at the map of the countries around Amestris and Xing to see if... What was it? Xeines? ( we'll go with that cause i'm to lazy to look back ) To see if Xeines was real, But i'm fairly convinced it isn't, not to offend, it is indeed a brilliant idea.
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