Reviews for Where are you Shawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So when you going to ya know update this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see what you mean. I'd love to be your beta but I'm not on computer so I won't be a big help since I'm the one who needs a boost up too. But this far I love the story and it seems to be very interesting over the time. Well I found this story only now and I hope some day you'll figure out where you want to go with this story. Until then, good luck :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww well I hope this story gets up soon! I love Shawn whump stories! And I've read so many if them, I can't remember what happened in each of them lol. It just seems like one HUGE story. I would do beta for you but I've never had the courage to write anything let alone post it. So I couldn't officially but if you want me to un-officially do it I'd be more than happy to. Just let me know! ;) thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i loved it immensely! what is going to happen? so much suspense |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd be more than willing to beta for you. I really like your story and cant wait to see where you take it next. If your interested you can just PM me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd be willing to read it over for you, if you'd like. I don't beta often, so if someone offers with more experience under their belt, go for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's ok! I'm sure you will think of something! Writers block totally sucks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is pretty good, but it could use some beta-ing. Until then, I'm withholding my favorite. Oh, and hits are good. I think. I think it means how many people see it, or how many people are on it long enough to read it, or something like that. I don't know. Something like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well if your story gets a lot of hits that is good meaning people are reading but not reviewing the story is good and you should continue if you feel that no one is reviewing then you don't continue its how you feel about this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() a hit means your story showed up in a serch. A view means they clicked on the link and potentially read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh oh something will happen to shawn |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had better not wait two years to update this again! You're torturing us! Lol. This is well written, but you're forgetting the quotation marks around the dialog like "this" just thought I'd let you know ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to your next chapter! :D |