Reviews for The Closet Incident
AGratefulReader chapter 1 . 2/19
How could you do this!? XD it was going very well lol
CatTheHalfa chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Hilarious :D
katara Y.O.U chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
LMAO!1 LOL! HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAGA!
4kitty101 chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
hahaha
Kra-zBiiNa-ture chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
THat was hilarious. yeah why did they come back to school? but anytwayz that was great!
skitzofrenic chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
ahaha i love itt

w00t :)
Daedalos chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Ahahaha that was priceless! Lol, cute thing with the notes, though! Thanks!

-chris
wolftracks17 chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
ahahahaha cute

but why would the WOW club come back? O.o confuzing...

loved it XD
liz-P.S chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
hey if u don't have the time or don't feel like it, can I finish it? :) I will include u in every chapter start and anywhere else u want, I've been meaning to start an account so it would be a good reason to start 1, just to let u know I would cut out the part where they got caught and just say that her phone rang and her mom was going to kill her if she wasn't home in the next 7 min or something :) plz reply at email
liz chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
I think u should turn it from a one shot to a whole story, or at least a few chapters :)
sciencefreak330 chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Awesome. The end was very, very funny.
Soului chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Not bad, it was cute in its own way. Just some concrit? There were a few times where you repeated words (especially at the beginning). Synonyms would make the story flow better. Also, the thing with the note was a little random. I think you could've worked up to it a bit more (just a few sentences mentioning how Danny was nervous about giving it to her, maybe that was the reason he was so distracted in class?) I think it would add some professionality to the story. Keep up the good work!