Reviews for Jacob's Home
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
glad it didn't happen this way. well written.
ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
A great story. Very well written.
ghostmctavish chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Sometimes, I feel sry for Jacob, until remind that he is creepy pedophile and stuff.

Anywy, quite good writen compared to most on tis site.
balletismyobsession chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
wow. i usually don't review stories, but i just had to review this one. it's amazing how much emotion and power is in this, even though it's short. i know it's complete, but i really wish you would continue!
awe.0 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Agh! It's amazing how something so short has so much power.

"I’m not fast enough, though. I’m at the edge of the woods when the screams start, and it’s all I can hear, all I will ever hear." -ouch, ouch, ouch! Just a little too late.

The last line is also very painful

Loved it, thank you.
AllisonIsAllison chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Oh this is really good! Please update soon!