Loved it! Very well written and insightful.

I love this story and would be perfect for the toad sage's charecter you should really write a story that has Jiraya with this sense even if he is not the main charecter well except that have his kid be a certin flash of yellow, with someone with excedingly large tatas would be great!

whoa, i got shivers.

i always loved 20 truths format

Man this was really good and I perfectly understand Jiraya stance on Sarutobi.

Beautiful.

a wonderful intake on jiraiya -i love the man to pieces-. thank you for writing this.

Just reading this short story has me on the brinks of tears. I really miss Jiraiya. He was honestly, one of the most loveable characters in the series. There is something I dislike in each of the characters in Naruto, but with Jiraiya. I just never found any fault with him. And truly his death was one of the most powerful piece Kishimoto had written. Anyway, thanks for the story - it reminded me of Jiraiya's greatness (SUPER PERVERT)

bloody brilliant, i don't like the whole tenten/kurenai thing you have going on but the rest are quite excellent.

After having lost sight of Jiraiya for a few months now, this sharply reminded me of why I love him so much. Thank you!

m, nice

wow. That was cool. Those little tidbits and pieces were great, particularly Tenten and Kurenai being Jiraiya's daughters.

Awesome story!

*raises cup* To Jiraiya, Man among Shinobi, rest well till your next great adventure in the next life. Farewell, Gama-Sennin.

And to you, for witting a fitting tribute *downs in one gulp*

Wonderful Oneshot - And that's all there's to say ;)

Atyan

Nice.