|Reviews for KOTOR 3: The Real War|
| machievelli chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Posted 5 May 2013, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. I was posting directly to the actual story threads, but my computer went down for the second time in six months with a virus in June of 2012. Then in November kotorfanmedia went down for reasons unknown, so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. I had waited for it to revive, but you on fanfiction deserve your reviews.
Some of the work I read is what I consider worthy of a professional. These are marked as Picks of the Week. While they are posted on Starwarsknights I am adding the best of the week where applicable.
Through KOTOR and TSL: Now the real war can begin
The piece is well written. Even though chapter one was merely a recap of the first adventure, and according to the author chapter two is a cecap of the second, I was drawn in by the writing style. You didn't merely rehash what had occurred, you made the story your own, and that is what a good writer does.
I especially liked how you had your Revan drug Carth to keep him from following, and giving us a destination for where the Exile can pick up the trail. One thing that bothered me about both games was that all we knew was that Revan was bound for the Unknown regions, and the Exile had to just search there. It would be like a General from the War Between the States looking for her old commander, and being told she went West with all of the Western US territories of that time to search.
Pick of the Week
| The-Black-Devil chapter 2 . 12/17/2008
u must update, please up date. i'm begging u
| MR11 chapter 2 . 2/29/2008
This is quite interesting and i like it with both females more please.
| darth pppoasigysavfsd chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
revan is canonically male, said THE CREATORS OF THE STAR WARS UNIVERSE!
| HLB chapter 2 . 2/11/2008
Looks like it'll be pretty interesting...tell me, did you kill off Bao-Dur? ()
| Revan Dante chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
I loved Revan and Malak's last words together. This is very nice, please continue.