|Reviews for Faceless Savior|
| Alicy-sunberg chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Simple, efficient and amazing story telling, introducing this nice character to us even thought it's such a brief story and he feels really well developed!
| sweettea1 chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Amazing! Emotional and powerful, especially Altaïr's answer to the woman. Splendid job on this story, and thank you for sharing!
| SketchyxNinja chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Awesome stuff. I love the whole stern behavior the assassin possesses. It was also well written and I was able to visualize it.
| A Spirit of the Stars chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Oooh, I love it! Super nicely written and I really enjoyed all the imagery and voice the story had!
| TheWoody chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Hi there. :-)
I really love this oneshot of yours.
You have an amazing eye for details and a good story arc.
Would you mind, if I did a translation for the german FF website?
| twin01 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Awesome story! After reading other AC fanfiction I think this one is one of the best so far.
| ReginaRomae chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Very good. :D I like this a lot. I've only recently begun to play the first game. (I'm not a very good gamer, and thus have not gotten far) But Altair is already one of my favorite characters.
Your writing style, especially with the fire, is very unique and grand.
| Antoine chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
This was absolutely brilliant! I am so happy that I came across this fanfic.
I am really craving more Assassin's Creed right now. I just finally finished doing EVERYTHING in the first game, (e.g. collected all flags, eliminated all templars) so now I have to go get the next one. I am thinking that I will play them in order, so that means I have to buy a Nintendo DS in order to play Assassin's Creed: Altaïr's Chronicles. Then, it's on to the Assassin's Creed: Lineage videos on YouTube, then Assassin's Creed: Bloodlines, Assassin's Creed II, Assassin's Creed II: Discovery, the book, Assassin's Creed II: Renaissance, and finally, Assassin's Creed II: Multiplayer, for which I would need to purchase an iPhone. Then, I guess, I would have to wait for Assassin's Creed II: Episodes and Assassin's Creed I. Oh, boy!
Anyway, I still have to save up some money to buy a new Nintendo DS and a copy of Assassin's Creed: Altaïr's Chronicles, so in the mean time, I am satisfying my craving with fanfiction, and yours is one of the best! I agree with most of my previous reviewers. The atmosphere and the final lines especially were perfect.
| 9837281933210 chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
this would make a much more epic "save citizen."
| therussetfox chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Brilliant fic! I read it on deviatART and just wanted to say it here.
Write more stories! Please!
| And So I Thought chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
perfect perfect perfect ending. just stupendous.
| Maranni123 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Wow. The talent you have puts my work and I to shame. Wonderful! 10/10!
| Dragoncl chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
BEST ENDING EVER! I'm in the same spot as you were right now. I NEED to keep reading about AC but most of the fics here have the classic Mary-Sue or the main character completely OOC. This was my savior. I was starting to lose hope that I would find anything worth reading. I'm so happy I found this! The writing was wonderful and descriptive and not revealing you the assassin was was a nice and smart touch on your part. Keep writing!
| Blackwell chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I didn't know about assassin creed till I read your fic, now I bought it to my sweet 7 year old nephew, I play in his house every time I go (which is almost everyday because I love to play it, muahahaha). You see what you did to me!
| 0elixir chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
As I was reading this I was surprised to find just how absorbed I was, I mean literally glued to the screen. I think you deserve a "well done" for that. :) And thank you for capturing the nuance of Altair's character so admirably. I think people tend to over simplify him as "arrogant jerk" when he is really quite complex. Lastly, I know everyone has said this, but Altair's final words really drive the story home, and I felt every emotion left unsaid.