Reviews for The Proposal |
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![]() ![]() loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so adorable! Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. Keep it up. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um, I'm pretty sure that Kagome's Mom's name is Mai or something...just for future refference ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story started out very good. the ending, however, could have been better. it seemed to have stopped suddenly especially since the rest of the story was so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You Killed the ending, everything else was great but the ending could have been done better.n.n Is there a Part 2 in the works? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. I was a little confused as to what was dialogue in the story, but I liked the actual story once I got that down. It figures that the two of them would fight before EVER telling each other their feelings toward each other! Maybe this wasn't the approach you were going for, but I always think their arguments are funny... tehehe |