Reviews for The Path of Destiny
Guest chapter 36 . 2/7
Now I Am all for suspense but using the scyther for this long as a plot device is just cruel so my extremely late advice to you about this is kill him or heal him
hinzetanner chapter 31 . 2/5
I have been holding on to this peeve for a few chapters now (clears throat)... FLAME WHEEL IS NOT FIRE SPIN. Flame wheel is when a Pokémon rolls into its opponent while covered in flames, whereas fire spin is what you have been decribing where the Pokémon creates a circle/vortex of flames around an opponent trapping it and keeping it from running away
brokendoll24 chapter 73 . 12/25/2016
Is there a sketch of Sequoiarc somewhere? Fakemons have cool designs, and this is the first one I've seen used in a story.

After getting Moon, it would've been pretty cool to have alolan growlithe to be the counterpart of vulpix instead of sandshrew. Though Snowcrystal knows fire moves so that probably wouldn't work out.
EeveeLover chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
Awesome Story! I also lover your YouTube channel and I just can't of your videos made me cry like the pokemon amv my immortal,and the Cyclone one.
naturetouchwhitewolf1 chapter 75 . 11/27/2016
It's awesome keep up the good work
DawnDayrider chapter 34 . 11/13/2016
Shouldn't Cyclone send the Lucario into the cave to track Blazefang with his Aura abilities?
WyldClaw chapter 75 . 11/12/2016
I think that day at the beach was just what the Pokémon needed to relax their nerves
Yuka Ayna The Being of Balance chapter 75 . 11/11/2016
I usually wait at deviantart for updates but now that I know you have it here in fanfiction makes it easiers for me to follow. I'm starting to have aome shippings now,

ScytheclawxAlex: The way they ineract with each other is just too cute, and Scytheclaw made an exception for her while Alex wants to be with Scytheclaw's group.

StormBladexThunder: I like it more than NightshadexThunder cause I think Night and Thunder are just in a brother sister relationship with each other. Stormbalde just keeps on trying to get close to Thunder and I think Thunder might come to like, or even love, him at some point.
WyldClaw chapter 74 . 9/29/2016
That was an amazing chapter.

I wish yenn would understand that Damien isn't a bad human and he just wants to help him. I bet keeping how he felt about cyclone after he killed articuno really hurt yenn so telling snowcrystal what happened probably took a huuuge weight of his back

I wonder how the other legendaries will take the news of articuno's death
Lollilou12 chapter 58 . 9/3/2016
Please, erase cyclones memories somehow! So he doesn't have to die! I don't want the previously sweet eevee to have to suffer...STAY DETERMINED!
Guest chapter 13 . 6/17/2016
I kinda hope that Snowcrystal evolves. I just think that she would make a beautiful arcanine.
silverwolfwarrior13 chapter 72 . 6/16/2016
Awesome update! Can't wait for more! XD
WyldClaw chapter 71 . 3/9/2016
That was incredible. After hearing her story I don't blame ashend for wanting to kill cyclone.

Poor yenn's been through so much hell.

I think Justin needs to get over his grudge of bug types that can easily turn on humans. It's not helping their cause

I didn't realize snowcrystal wasn't raised by her parents. I hope she gets to be reunited with her tribe soon

Will the Guardian be able to help them?
silverwolfwarrior13 chapter 71 . 3/8/2016
Happy to see a new update. Excellent work as always! Can't wait for next chap!
The desert chapter 68 . 12/24/2015
"We got a lot of first timers here make sure they get it." Ryhorn yelled. "If this is your first crossing listen up there is no water till we reach the other side move out!" Another yelled. And another journey beings.
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