|Reviews for The Melt|
| runelt99 chapter 18 . 3/8
Holy shit! An op naruto story that doesnt think that 6 year olds or whatever pre pub age being into romance isnt weird! Its kinda what instantly kills my desire to read a naruhina story...
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/8
| ExpertoftheBlade chapter 14 . 1/19
honestly I could see the melt being used for interrorgation. Imagine after a prisoner is worn down be either Ibiki or Anko, they leave the room and the prisoner, still restrained, hears a disembodied voice, asking questions. Thinking hes gone crazy and there is no one actually there he begins to confess
| A Devil May Cry but we learn chapter 12 . 1/19
seriously the hinata thing crush love whatever is played and boring I don't know why people like it its to boring if I was naruto and in a relationship with hinata I'd cheat constantly
| Srw chapter 34 . 1/16
This is very good story would very much like to see it completed. The story you have wrote is very original and I like that hope the urge to write again comes back. Thank you for the story so far
| MadMaxxCoyote chapter 6 . 10/11/2017
So...Naruto's Kekkei Genki is literally Obito's Kamui ability and he's learning pro wrestling...
As a grappler by training (Judo and submission wrestling) I'm just going to shake my head.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/7/2017
He would do what was best for... in his own mind perhaps, Konoha. That's the way it always seems to be. Konoha comes first. Personally speaking? Fuck Konoha!
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/6/2017
Personally, I feel the Assassin's Blades would have been PERFECT for him with this bloodline.
| quenless king chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
please update soon it's an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter
| Cocoloco235 chapter 30 . 9/3/2017
Oh my fricken God! This chappie though... That ending though... I totally thought it was gonna be the opposite. Way to go, you're an awesome writer!
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/13/2017
While I am not particularly fond of konohamaru dying I see that it was needed to progress the story and since I've read a lot of fanfiction in the past few years I say you did a good job of making us feel an emotion. It isn't exactly to the amount of emotion I usually like to feel but you did good anyways
| Rishi2001 chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
Kage bunshin? Gai? He cant mold chakra bruh...
| CaptainToast321 chapter 34 . 8/11/2017
No update in 8 years means dead.
| Sgt Sparorow chapter 34 . 6/4/2017
This is sad for me, I love this story but the last update was 8 years ago.
| bad girl 61 chapter 34 . 5/30/2017
I was hoping you would continue this story. It's different and I like it. I am the same way. I can't write every day and that's what they want. If I did that, they would be shitty chapters.