Reviews for The Melt
runelt99 chapter 18 . 3/8
Holy shit! An op naruto story that doesnt think that 6 year olds or whatever pre pub age being into romance isnt weird! Its kinda what instantly kills my desire to read a naruhina story...
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8
Really good
ExpertoftheBlade chapter 14 . 1/19
honestly I could see the melt being used for interrorgation. Imagine after a prisoner is worn down be either Ibiki or Anko, they leave the room and the prisoner, still restrained, hears a disembodied voice, asking questions. Thinking hes gone crazy and there is no one actually there he begins to confess
A Devil May Cry but we learn chapter 12 . 1/19
seriously the hinata thing crush love whatever is played and boring I don't know why people like it its to boring if I was naruto and in a relationship with hinata I'd cheat constantly
Srw chapter 34 . 1/16
This is very good story would very much like to see it completed. The story you have wrote is very original and I like that hope the urge to write again comes back. Thank you for the story so far
MadMaxxCoyote chapter 6 . 10/11/2017
So...Naruto's Kekkei Genki is literally Obito's Kamui ability and he's learning pro wrestling...

As a grappler by training (Judo and submission wrestling) I'm just going to shake my head.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/7/2017
He would do what was best for... in his own mind perhaps, Konoha. That's the way it always seems to be. Konoha comes first. Personally speaking? Fuck Konoha!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/6/2017
Personally, I feel the Assassin's Blades would have been PERFECT for him with this bloodline.
quenless king chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
please update soon it's an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter
Cocoloco235 chapter 30 . 9/3/2017
Oh my fricken God! This chappie though... That ending though... I totally thought it was gonna be the opposite. Way to go, you're an awesome writer!
Guest chapter 30 . 8/13/2017
While I am not particularly fond of konohamaru dying I see that it was needed to progress the story and since I've read a lot of fanfiction in the past few years I say you did a good job of making us feel an emotion. It isn't exactly to the amount of emotion I usually like to feel but you did good anyways
Rishi2001 chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
Kage bunshin? Gai? He cant mold chakra bruh...
CaptainToast321 chapter 34 . 8/11/2017
Uh no.

No update in 8 years means dead.
Sgt Sparorow chapter 34 . 6/4/2017
This is sad for me, I love this story but the last update was 8 years ago.
bad girl 61 chapter 34 . 5/30/2017
I was hoping you would continue this story. It's different and I like it. I am the same way. I can't write every day and that's what they want. If I did that, they would be shitty chapters.
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