Reviews for The Melt
Sebine chapter 1 . 9/16
Continue to wish this will be completed.
Guest chapter 34 . 8/28
Why is it every time I come across a decent story its been abandoned. I wish I had the talent to write one but alas I do not.
Guest chapter 34 . 8/11
Haha... Them contractors are troublesome. My mom had dealt with one before...
AbandonedAuthors chapter 34 . 7/30
Its been nine years
Guest chapter 22 . 7/28
I find it stupid for naruto to have parmanent claws and always chanelling kyuubi chakra as the byakugan and sharingan can see it making sasuke and neji suspicious of him and leading to his secret leaking and giving sasuke an opportunity to harass naruto
doubledamn chapter 29 . 6/16
Pity he couldn't just have the Shinigami take Orochi's head and leave everything else.
doubledamn chapter 23 . 6/16
Not sure how Naruto would know this, but I was kinda expecting/hoping that he'd confront Just-Cursed-Sasuke with a "So you're going to fight your comrades/family to 'test your capacity/mettle', Sasuke?". Just throw that night of the massacre right in his face with a 'you're becoming Itachi' theme, shock him out of it or send him into a blind rage.
yeeter chapter 8 . 6/7
Y u h8 me D: btw awesome story bro
nessiesmith2012 chapter 30 . 5/4
You havent updated so im not gonna finish the story but last few chapters have annoyed me, naruto goes on and on about people making his decisions but does no better. He continues to let them and everyone around him tells him he has to do the things when he complains. He really gets no back up to say "yes it is shitty, do something about it then"
zalcik chapter 34 . 4/20
loved your story, i hope you continue it soon
Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 4/17
Why hinata
runelt99 chapter 18 . 3/8
Holy shit! An op naruto story that doesnt think that 6 year olds or whatever pre pub age being into romance isnt weird! Its kinda what instantly kills my desire to read a naruhina story...
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8
Really good
ExpertoftheBlade chapter 14 . 1/19
honestly I could see the melt being used for interrorgation. Imagine after a prisoner is worn down be either Ibiki or Anko, they leave the room and the prisoner, still restrained, hears a disembodied voice, asking questions. Thinking hes gone crazy and there is no one actually there he begins to confess
A Devil May Cry but we learn chapter 12 . 1/19
seriously the hinata thing crush love whatever is played and boring I don't know why people like it its to boring if I was naruto and in a relationship with hinata I'd cheat constantly
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