Reviews for The Melt
ArcaneMaverick chapter 34 . 11/7
I love it when an author totally botches a job and has to eat their self-righteous words that were honestly doomed from the beginning. What a failure.
MASK3D-B4TT4LION chapter 3 . 9/21
yochan123 chapter 8 . 6/22
God I can’t even read this anymore. All these fucks don’t deserve naruto and everyone is out to get him
yochan123 chapter 6 . 6/22
Damn it Hokage why are you keeping his family info from him it literally doesn’t make sense
yochan123 chapter 5 . 6/22
Omg this bloodline starting to come
Plumpy chapter 34 . 6/19
Hope u get your itch to write back! Best of luck.
Idrinktomuch10 chapter 31 . 6/1
Kinda glad this is abandoned. I don’t feel the need to finish it after this chapter as I dislike how this is going. A promising story that has been going down hill for a while due to Naruto being far to emotionally unstable for my taste. All in all it was a good read but finally got to the point where I am starting to dislike most of the characters.
TimeLordQuetzalcoatl chapter 17 . 4/24
hinata is not the ship we need
realfan16 chapter 6 . 2/15
Lmao did you just bring wrestling to the Naruto world dang ingenious and original(well to me at least
RoseeQueen chapter 34 . 2/7
I hope you continue this! I loved it and would love to see it finished
frankiebayer2002 chapter 12 . 2/6
This is prefect
Anonymous User chapter 34 . 2/6
It’s a shame this story is discontinued, I was really enjoying it!
K chapter 34 . 1/25
You say you haven’t abandoned your stories, but this story, but you haven’t posted since,, like,, 2009? It’s been 12 YEARS, so look me in the mf-ing eyes and tell me you haven’t abandoned this story. like,,, oof. At least say it’s cancelled or put it up for adoption so that someone else can take the lead. Your story is amazing, and I’d hate to see it go to waste. You’re very talented from what I’ve seen. -K
ElectricZ1234 chapter 10 . 1/4
dam that response to the message was ELITE. BTW great story
ElectricZ1234 chapter 9 . 1/4
so the knife a girl if he fingers her
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