Reviews for The Melt
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11
Your a good writer and i advise anyone to read your uzamaki among the dunes but i some reason cannot read this story well writen and good but it seems to be lacking somthing but im sure thats just me i advise this writer to anyone reading this review and if u haven't read the uzamaki among the dune then to do it the story is a amazing read and is one of the 1st i read that i liked
panther73110 chapter 10 . 4/8
Will u be finishing this story
cody chapter 34 . 3/20
Loved it!
Guest chapter 24 . 3/16
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btnerb chapter 29 . 3/12
Alright, I like your story and will give a much more thoughtful review once I am current, but I admit to confusion. Why didn't Enma kill Orrochimaru in just before closing Sarutobi's eyes? He clearly wanted Orrochimaru dead and had the opportunity to make it so. I'm confused.
lindan24 chapter 34 . 3/6
Hi! I wanted to let you know that I really love this story. The plot is really awesome and I can't wait until you put up the next chapter!
Hackee le Nooblordo chapter 34 . 3/6
I hope you update soon, I really look forward to continueing the story, though I was sad that Hiruzen died, and Naruto's parets got nailed to the wall, (Ik, a little late in the reviews) but hey I read hellsing and other twisted shit, if I cant handle this I dont deserve to watch or read Hellsing
basugays chapter 34 . 3/5
I really, really love this story so I hope you upload a new chapter soon!
Guest chapter 34 . 2/23
I can't help help but notice that you haven't updated the melt in a very long time. I was just wondering why that is. it was such a good story. if you wouldn't mind replying you could pm me. my username is Hapoochapoocheenas. thank you for the wondeful stories. I have read them all
LordHatredX chapter 34 . 2/3
i love this story,to bad there havent been any updates in few years on it

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Manillalu chapter 34 . 2/1
Poor naruto, awesome story and totally kick ass Kekkei genkai. Can't wait to see how it works against the akatsuki
seanklovett chapter 34 . 1/20
This is a great story. I hope you start to update again.
The Immortal Siegfried chapter 34 . 1/19
Hope this story eventually reaches a conclusion. Your previous completed works are master pieces.
Green Apple Chan chapter 34 . 1/14
i know its been really long since you last updated but PLEASE! just update 1 or 2 chapters! you are such a good fanfic writer! the cliff hanger you wrote was so awesome i was thinking OMG WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!? just dont write if you dont want to! ;.P

luv, Green Apple Chan
Arafell chapter 33 . 1/6
The Melt is definitely a unique ability, one that I actually really like. That's fairly rare - most unique Kekkai Genkai end up being kind of gimmicky, but this one seems fairly decent. I'm still curious as to what happens when he tries to merge with a human. He could probably test with a shadow clone on an enemy, couldn't he? Don't know if he's explored it at all. . .

The way you handle characters is interesting. The series is definitely darker and edgier when you write it, what with all the deaths and a lot less 'Friendship through superior firepower' than canon. It'll be interesting to see the development of Gaara and Sasuke, whether they change personality wise or whether Naruto is forced to assassinate them in the end.

Good show - hope you continue this.
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