Reviews for The Melt
lalo80 chapter 13 . 7/29
Buena historia, no tardes en continuarla
Awesome chapter 34 . 7/10
Dont read New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in youlelel
SAOFan22 chapter 34 . 6/29
Yup you've abandoned all of your stories
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27
Gai's chakra coils aren't well enough developed to use a kage bunshin in its why he's a taijutsu specialist. He can only use the three basic jutsu.
Jaedyn704 chapter 1 . 6/27
good very good
queeneezer chapter 34 . 4/18
You are awesome man you stories are great and your reply ro idiots is hilarious keep it up man
Guest chapter 16 . 4/12
Dont read New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in youlelel
Guest chapter 34 . 4/10
Dear pudgy pudge. How's the 12 hour shifts going. I was just wondering if maybe you stated updating on another site as it's been a good 6 years since you updated the melt. Was just wondering if there was a plan for closure or the cliffs you left is my undeniable defeat.

Was too lazy to log in-: Ketaramaru
Guest chapter 8 . 4/7
As they walked down the street, Naruto nodded to those who smiled at him. Those who didn't he turned his nose up at…they didn't deserve his smile. They weren't worthy. Now that he knew what he held, he had no patience for these people
O wow. o wow. People who don't smile at Naruto are assholes. O wow.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/7
The clone had said that it had been reading about the bijuu…and Naruto's eyes widened.
Does naruto have amnesia? Why does he need to have two different epiphanies for tje same shit?
Sailor Saturn fan chapter 18 . 3/22
Hee hee hee :D
imnotraven16 chapter 34 . 3/18
excellent story
Sailor Saturn fan chapter 16 . 3/5
Aww man, I really like Kakashi as Naruto's sensei. But between Sasuke and Naruto, I think Naruto will win. Sorry Kakashi, I'm with Kurenai :)
Sailor Saturn fan chapter 15 . 3/5
Naruto's team is cool
Guest chapter 5 . 2/23
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