|Reviews for The Melt|
| doubledamn chapter 29 . 6/16
Pity he couldn't just have the Shinigami take Orochi's head and leave everything else.
| doubledamn chapter 23 . 6/16
Not sure how Naruto would know this, but I was kinda expecting/hoping that he'd confront Just-Cursed-Sasuke with a "So you're going to fight your comrades/family to 'test your capacity/mettle', Sasuke?". Just throw that night of the massacre right in his face with a 'you're becoming Itachi' theme, shock him out of it or send him into a blind rage.
| yeeter chapter 8 . 6/7
Y u h8 me D: btw awesome story bro
| nessiesmith2012 chapter 30 . 5/4
You havent updated so im not gonna finish the story but last few chapters have annoyed me, naruto goes on and on about people making his decisions but does no better. He continues to let them and everyone around him tells him he has to do the things when he complains. He really gets no back up to say "yes it is shitty, do something about it then"
| zalcik chapter 34 . 4/20
loved your story, i hope you continue it soon
| Kingkong101 chapter 12 . 4/17
| runelt99 chapter 18 . 3/8
Holy shit! An op naruto story that doesnt think that 6 year olds or whatever pre pub age being into romance isnt weird! Its kinda what instantly kills my desire to read a naruhina story...
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/8
| ExpertoftheBlade chapter 14 . 1/19
honestly I could see the melt being used for interrorgation. Imagine after a prisoner is worn down be either Ibiki or Anko, they leave the room and the prisoner, still restrained, hears a disembodied voice, asking questions. Thinking hes gone crazy and there is no one actually there he begins to confess
| A Devil May Cry but we learn chapter 12 . 1/19
seriously the hinata thing crush love whatever is played and boring I don't know why people like it its to boring if I was naruto and in a relationship with hinata I'd cheat constantly
| Srw chapter 34 . 1/16
This is very good story would very much like to see it completed. The story you have wrote is very original and I like that hope the urge to write again comes back. Thank you for the story so far
| MadMaxxCoyote chapter 6 . 10/11/2017
So...Naruto's Kekkei Genki is literally Obito's Kamui ability and he's learning pro wrestling...
As a grappler by training (Judo and submission wrestling) I'm just going to shake my head.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/7/2017
He would do what was best for... in his own mind perhaps, Konoha. That's the way it always seems to be. Konoha comes first. Personally speaking? Fuck Konoha!
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/6/2017
Personally, I feel the Assassin's Blades would have been PERFECT for him with this bloodline.
| quenless king chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
please update soon it's an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter