I hope you come back to this work soon.

you told people to fornicate themselves yet 10 yrs sees your lack of return. loved what i read though

you took this man's parents and his baby brother for real...

i loved it absolutely loved it!

that was good keep the chapters coming

Thanks for the update your a great writer how did you learn to perfectly blend action and emotion while still following cannon this is a great read plz get someone you know and teac RM about the ways of writing

Yo jsut realkized you know the brothers on the sound four can you make them albino uzumakis with the melt ability but becaue their albino they can't melt into solids but instead gases/water instead and then have the brothers ally with naruto or something

I loved the concept but these 2 last chapters makes Naruto out to be either a retard or a wimp, why? You ruined all the character development you had made for him

You're a retard
No constructive critisism at all for you, I just want to say it tyou
You are the biggest retard I've seen writing naruto fanfics, cmon, how can somebody be so retarded that they can't ignore a fox which he knows is fucking hard sealed

You had all the chances in the world but you made him with adhd and slow in the brain? Fucking really?

That would be rather painful...
I don't even want to imagine how he's going to PICK UP the boulder, much less carry it *shudder*

Over ten years... Damn.

Fuck u

I’m only 3 chapters in so the only thing I can complain about is your separator. It’s really annoying.

Wow, it’s been 10 years and 3 days since this has been updated... that makes me feel old. Too bad this story died.