very interesting start you have got me curious, and i know pairings aren't decided but i will just put a vote in now for temari or tenten ja nee

This story has a lot of promise. I like how you are setting things up for future chapters and I can't wait to read more..._

Interesting story so far. I can't wait till you update!

alright... new story, good start, and certainly hook some readers already (me included) with the whole prospect of melt. Don't kno wut Asuma and the Sandaime have between them, but i'm sure u'll explain. Besides, u can't have naru-chan not meet uncle Asumy

anyway, i suggest perhaps put down the other stories before juggling a new one. But if u feel like u can, feel free. It's just wut i think it's better so u're not pressured into needing to update (although to tell u teh truth, u shouldn't even feel a pressure to update. it's fanfic for freak sake. it's suppose to be relaxing!)

UPDATE SOON!.

This is a great start to a good story. Thanks.

liked it

I do love it. I especially like when Naruto cooed happily when he grabbed onto Hiashi's finger.

i like it update soon