|Reviews for Temptation in the Form of a Finnigan|
| ShadowX199 chapter 2 . 4/9
I just have to post that a lot of people like myself only read complete stories. (You don't buy unfinished books, do you?) And while yes this is free, the chance of a story becoming abandoned is too great that i only read stories that have been marked or verified by others as being complete. So when you said "Feedback NOW" at chapter 2... yea, a lot of people aren't seeing the story till it's done.
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 10 . 7/28/2016
Loved it hope theres a sequel ~Stasia
| Jaide Wolf chapter 10 . 6/6/2013
That is so beautiful! You had me crying at the end! Gods im emotional at the moment. Michelle: Im pretty sure we can see that.
Beth: Oh. Shut up.
Chloe: No shes right.
Beth: I hate you both.
Baby: But you dont hate baby do you?
Beth: No baby i dont hate you. Sorry. My multiple personalitys sometimes get the better of me. Lovely ending to a cute story. Also. Dont just stick to Harry/Draco. Keep trying the idea of Harry/Seamus.
| tobimadaraisawsome666 chapter 10 . 8/8/2012
wow neville should be a love guru
| KellyKatt19 chapter 10 . 7/7/2012
This is so adorably funny, ikept giggling out loud :) . Great job !
| LoopedInTheLoops chapter 10 . 11/9/2011
Cause he's gorgeous. AH... love that line
| BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 10 . 3/9/2010
That was cute
I really enjoyed it!
I've never read this pairing before, I liked it!
| maryjblige4evr chapter 8 . 1/3/2010
LOVE the story! And did you REALLY write hidden fire? I think its beautiful! Keep up the good work
| TheologyDiscography chapter 10 . 11/18/2008
that was cute and somewhat fluffy. i like it.
| Nicrafetix chapter 2 . 8/4/2008
A total *headdesk* situation there...
| duckrebel chapter 10 . 3/11/2008
Absolutely adorable! Very cute and entertaining, I really enjoyed it! Also the poem was incredible. I love it and may very well be printing it out and putting it on my dorm wall (with credit to the author of course)
| Ariaeris chapter 10 . 3/7/2008
Short, a quick read, and absolutely amazing. This story rocks!
| seventhSINwrath chapter 10 . 3/4/2008
Aw,so cute!I loved it
| ribbons and chains chapter 10 . 12/29/2007
i loved the whole thing. one question though, in chap. six...dried cat food sundae?
| CHANKA1 chapter 10 . 12/18/2007
frankly i liked all the chapters coz i read them all just now, like in 30 minutes :P
lol, but the good thing is tht i like neville in ths story, i dunno y i just think he's smarter n being smarter makes u cuter n being cuter makes u hotter so...
woow... i guess i like neville now :D