Reviews for Drastic Measures
steph.c chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
This is a really great story! I loved it! It was good to see proper spelling and punctuation. The stroy was fantastic at capturing the way Stephenie Meyer intended the characters to be- even the alternate ending kept within how she wrote the book. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Random Moose on the Loose chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Poor Bella! That was a awesome ending! Loved it.

And the way you got around the treaty was cool...


And it was actually believable.
Aldara Gaea chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
You know, if it weren't for the fact that we get another book from SM's version - I really, really, really wish it had gone like that! Could you possibly continue? I'm not normally into AU stories, but that was really supurb!
dlhk chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
oh, so so sad. I was practically crying. You were right about the tissues... but I didn't have any near me. I want more!
IsabellaMCullen chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I am VERY impressed by your story. I think you covered all the bases very well ((I have often wondered how they will get around the treaty in Breaking Dawn)) .. though I have to say that you had me crying at Bella's request to see Charlie's grave. :(

I am in awe of your ability to get into the minds of the characters so well to be able to compose something so moving.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Cullenista chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
I think I would have been perfectly happy if Eclipse had ended like this. I can't wait for her to become a vamp and I don't really care how it happens. Extremely well written; good tension in the scene following her injury. And perfectly plausible that it could happen like this, given the danger magnet she is. Loved all of Edwards reactions to Jacob. Keep up the good work. The less said about Jake, the better.
pinkxXxkitten chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
aw...write another chapter! -you know u want to!
LindaRoo chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
I like your ending better than Stephenie's. LOL
jenniblu421 chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
That was very well written! I enjoyed it quite a lot!
hij567 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
That was really good! I had tears!
jashaw chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Oh Man! I had your name on a list to read for awhile and I finally got around to reading some of your great stories today. Of course I've got screaming kids, a sink full of dishes and laundry pilling up but I can't stop! I love your stories and this one is great too! You do a great job making your stories believable which is one of my biggest fan fic pet peeves! This one is great too I was even getting a little teary eyed! Thanks for making my day!
Somigliana chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
That was exceptionally well-written and wonderfully emotive! Sniffles.
obssd-reader chapter 1 . 2/21/2008

Very wonderfully written too.

nielanut chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
This was so so so AMAZING! WOW! WOW! WOW!
Emmy-loo chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Another excellent story, though I hate Jacob with a passion. Keep it up! (I would write another novel-length review, but I'm afraid I don't have the time :P)
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