Reviews for Fantasy & Responsibility
PokeChaser chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Very well written!
twitchyfingers chapter 5 . 10/12/2008
This is fairly interesting so far, and I like where you're starting to go but it's disappointing that you haven't actually gotten anywhere yet. I hope you eventually continue writing this.
Orioncat chapter 5 . 3/17/2008
The story looks good...Is this a story of romance between Tom and his fiance or between him and Jane? Just curious.

I like the outline so far of emotions, although any reader would love longer chapters.

I look forward to your update. Thanks for submitting!
Swingflip chapter 5 . 3/15/2008
Really good! I'm excited for more!
Sarahbarr17 chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
It's good to see Mary Paul's point of view. A little bit of a cliffhanger at the end!

Sarah x
MariahDezie chapter 5 . 3/6/2008
Keep going, I cant wait to find out what happens next!
jakeline chapter 5 . 3/6/2008
Another great chapter. I look forward to get to know Mary! :)

/ jakeline
MariahDezie chapter 4 . 3/5/2008
Please keep going this is really good.
Lady Highschoolnerd chapter 4 . 3/5/2008
So will Lefroy meet Jane? Please update soon. Longer chapters would be nice.
jakeline chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
Another great chapter, but oh so short! Keeps me want to read though! hurry up and write the next one! I'm waiting! ;)

/ jakeline
Swingflip chapter 3 . 2/26/2008
i love it! please keep going :D
jakeline chapter 3 . 2/22/2008
aww it ended too soon! I can't wait to read more!
jakeline chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
another great chapter! I want more! Update soon!

/ Jakeline
Sarahbarr17 chapter 2 . 2/14/2008
Your writing is very good...

Sarah x
Lady-of-Imagination chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
I've been looking for a fiction about becoming jane, this one looks like it will be very good. write more!
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