Reviews for Fully Alive
EpikalStorms chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Aw... *eyes shine* You must write more, immediately! NOW! This is.. amazing... *sniffles* Poor Squalo, I always feel so bad for him!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
you do know his name is Xanxus, not Xemnas. Xemnas is from kingdom hearts...
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Love it! Just one thing, why do you call Xanxus Xemnas? Can't wait for more XD
kikyokyoyahibari chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
is Takeshi gonna visit Squalo again? Isn't spelled Xanxus? Is Squalo still gonna follow Xanxus but in a relationship with Takeshi? Is Squalo gonna call Yamamoto, 'Takeshi'?
MmeRoronoa chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Hi ! I want to quickly follow fast fast !Please ! This is the first YamaSqualo I meet and I'm in love !
XxXChibiBunniXxX chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Great story! It's been a couple of months are you still planing to update? If so than please update soon!
halcyonide chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
o_o isnt his name Xanxus? Great fanfic though!
kalista chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
aw so adorable and sad well... I am fine with it, the more the sadder, the better! HAHAHA Am I sadist! You should write an evil sadist Xanxus x Squalo! That might be interesting.
sexypancake chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
i like this pairing. it's so hot. haha.
Between The Nightmares chapter 1 . 2/10/2008

Why are you putting 'Xemnas' in here? The Varia Boss is XANXUS.

Other than that, this is pretty good but a tad confusing. You start it akwardly, and I don't understand where Yama came from or how he got in the situation in the first place.
Sweetcake rainbow chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
ok, just so you know: Xemnas is actually "Xanxus", Volgola is "Vongola", and what Yamamoto carries isn't a shinai, is a "katana". Anyway, the first chapter is nice, but next time try to get the names right..._"
urja shannan chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
nice pair! keep it up!
animegirl000 chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Its a good fic so far : D Keep it up, can't wait to read the next chapter
Florin chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
...would've been a nice chapter weren't for the one thing: you kept on saying Xemnas instead of Xanxus. Xemnas Kingdom Hearts. Xanxus KHR! Xanxus' name wasn't mentioned- not even ONCE so either that's one heck of a typo that you kept on doing again and again, or this used to be a different fic and you just changed some details/names/whatever.