|Reviews for Lackluster|
| Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 6/11
That was excellent, amusing and cute, I loved it and nice job but could you make another of these two soon please
| Caleigho chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
This is really good! And very vivid language
| LeaMarie F. Metallium chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Nice, I like it.
| Sassyblondexoxo chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
"Raph made a broad gesture with his hand that indicated ‘all this bullshit’."
LOL, loved that line. And this one:
“Stop being so fuckin’ emo. Go to bed, and maybe if you’re a good boy, I’ll let you hold my Bonrai.”
Understated funny. Another great job.
Kudos to you.
| Raphshell chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
I really like this little story. I rarely see anything fiction based on the lost season, so it is nice for a change. I'm a real sucker for Raph and Leo bonding moments, so this was great. You did an excellent job on your descriptions as well. The part with Leo falling asleep standing up was pretty funny.