Reviews for When It's Not All Right
NorthernLights94 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
This was fantastic! I can't believe this was your first one shot! Great job.
LittleRedOne chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I could absolutely see this having taken place. Where she'd come out to talk and ramble and avoid the real topic she was worried about. And I could see Harry being terrified of her breaking down and crying to him, because he wasn't an expert on how to handle that. And the conversation and concerns were all fully believable and perfect.

passionate4pens chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
i love it. especially the end sentences. sad!
ILikeIt chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
And how I cherished those last HarryxHermione moments... good job. I think everyone has abandoned Harry Potter, but I'm glad you tried.
Lansday-Larry chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Very nice. It really does improve on the book. I always felt that the book was rushed. Well thanks for the good read.