|Reviews for Dutiful|
| jordan114725 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Nice fic, liked the AU part of it
| SierralaineWalsh chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
An AU? It's so cute... I liked it so much! So adorable. Weeh A construction worker? Hmm.. :)
| Trevor X chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I'd almost call this one "Content with the Little Things".
Laughed silently, since I'm at the library right now, and outright laughter would probably offend somebody. I liked it, btw.
| Hikaru Morinaga chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Aww, Manna, this was adorable! And I could totally imagine Wallace laughing so loud that you could hear him from several feet away over the phone.
Kent being a construction worker is an odd occupation, but I thought it fit him.
...And then I imagined him all sweaty and then I had to get a mop.
| FireEdge chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Whe, AU! It's always fun to read an AU story. It's a nice change of pace, you know? Anyway, very cute. By the way, I failed to read the genre of the story, so when I read: "This particular day was different" I immediately jumped to conclusions and went: "OMG HE'S GOING TO HAVE AN ACCIDENT AND DIE! NO!" _ Yeah, I'm not sure why I thought that. Still, I enjoyed this. It was different, so that's always good. )
| Edward Houshi chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
I like this story a lot, but it seemed just a little off. Maybe just because of the different time period. It's far more difficult to put characters in an entirely different setting. Still, it was very good, and really sweet.
| Absol Master chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Erk: You've got great grammar.
Canas: Great story! I was confused at first because I thought alarm clocks didn't exist in our time. But after some research, I realised it was AU, and I also began to notice how nice it was. The story is simple, but very interesting!
Raven: Alright...This story was...simple. Understood it.
Lucius: It makes me feel so comfortable and warm! I loved the ending!
Marcus: Well done. I like your stories.
Oswin: This one was great, though it was AU. I never really understand AU.
Kent: Why, thank you! Me as a construction worker. It looks like a hard job, but I'd sure like to do such useful work.
| themagebear chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
the magebear isnt sure how it feels about kent/lyn, but it was a great story anyway. lots of fluff.
| Fan Fan Girl chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
You're right - although this was still a Lyn/Kent pairing, it was different than usual. Maybe because no one died or became ill or earnestly confessed their love? XD That seems to happen a lot, but not in this one.
Actually, it's nice to read a relatively plotless story. Well, I mean, I suppose that Kent's work is the problem of the story, but still it was solved easily and that was kind of a nice change of pace. Rather than a dynamic adventure or sweeping romance, this was just a quiet day in the passing years of their life together. Kinda sweet. Pleasant.
I like the details in the middle. About his thermos and lunchbox and stuff. I don't know why, but that part was my favorite from the whole story. Maybe because that paragraph was just really smooth.
I don't have any criticism... Oh, wait. Nevermind. XD In the beginning, I kept wondering where you were going with this story... maybe try writing with a bit more clarity?
Ah whatever. I'm sleepy. But this was a nice read, and it's good to see you back!
| Sara Jaye chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Oh, this was so cute! Even the most dutiful of men need a day off once in a while, eh? And I'm a sucker for FE AUs.