|Reviews for A New Generation|
| Beccarjane chapter 13 . 4/26/2009
I like this story. Tis good so far...more please!
| Dozer chapter 13 . 4/25/2009
So glad you finished another chapter, and can't wait to read the next one. You put a lot of action into this one. I can't wait to see what happens. Leo's gotta be pretty steamed at Anna for running off again, and Tyler. If the other turtles know Tyler's missing will they come looking for him only to find that Leo has finished off the Foot. How many Foot were there? Does Leo need his brother's help? What about Kari and Leo and the crush their kids have on each other? What do you think about the crush that some people think occurred between Kari and Leo? The only thing I see could be changed is Raph saying he going to break his son's neck. Raph is a parent, and that's not right. If you have ever seen the 80's turtles you'll see that Raph is more sarcastic instead all around mad. I hope you update soon.
| DaAmazingMeepers chapter 13 . 4/25/2009
Heh, Falcon's in trouble!XD More soon please!:3
| Tortugita chapter 5 . 4/25/2009
I wasn't sure about this story at first. There are a few about the turtle's children that were dreadful. I'm not really into stories told in first person and some characterizations irk me a little, but overall, I'm really getting into this. :)
| Dozer chapter 12 . 1/4/2009
I am really glad you decided to write more on your story. I hope to read the next chapter soon. If you want some suggestions, I think you can spin it a couple of ways. You can have Ana saved by her her crush agian on orders of his mother, or one of the turtles or that one of the turtles followed her. Is Leo going to be angry? Hope to find out soon. Great job. Love the chapter. Happy new year.
| ChibiLover123 chapter 12 . 12/23/2008
...That...was all Nathan's fault! STILL...I can't wait to see the fight. Great job.
| DaAmazingMeepers chapter 12 . 12/23/2008
'Bout time; I almost forgot this story existed! More soonER please!:3
| Dozer chapter 11 . 8/11/2008
I love how creative you are in the story. You asked for some idea so here are some that I have.
Kai and Anna have to meet according to how the story is going. Do they find out that there parents know each other? Do the parents find out about their kids?
How about Anna's party while her father is away? How much fun is she allowed to get away with without her restricting father to stop her?
All of the turtles still pratice together still, don't they? You could do a section on that, or something with all of the turtles children.
Do the turtles' wives drinl tea? Maybe they can have a tea party. They could be trying to help the turtles and their children to have some mannors and such what not.
I hope these ideas help you, and please continue your story.
| PuldohFAN chapter 11 . 6/7/2008
Is this going to turn into a Romeo & Juliet/tmnt?
Being a bit rebeliuos is aways good on this types of fics!Update!
| turtlegirl chapter 11 . 6/1/2008
Way passed cool!
At first da fic wasn't really that much intersting ta me
but afta a couple a chs it got really cool!
Da fight with da Psnakes was da rescuer was betta!
A bet Karai's husband is Chaplain huh? GREAT!
Leo has ta watch out fo'is litta girl,couse luv is in da air!
Com'on an update already!Da story is great!
| Cala chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
I like what you have done here. You were very creative. Where would you like to go from here?
Would you like for Anna to meet secreatly with her savior, or her to find out about the relationship with Leo and Karia? Have you thought about writing a little scene about Donny teaching the children about science? Maybe you might want to put in a training sesion.
I don't know. These are just some ideas that might help get you thinking.
| goldykat chapter 11 . 5/18/2008
Great so far,
If you need ideas, maybe Kai could get a mission to capture Ana, but he dosnt know that its the girl he saved until after they ambush her and he sees her face?
| Ninjagirl27 chapter 11 . 5/18/2008
Loving the story, but as for your problem... Hm... well, Ana obviously has to meet Kai at some point. Why not on her way home from April's? Umm... As for the reason, I have no clue. That's all the contribution I can contribute. Good luck though :)
| ManicFanFicHunter chapter 3 . 5/18/2008
WHOAH!This is such an uhh..."detailed"
cool!Are they (kids) going to face real life dangers and enemies
like their fathers had?
| Laura Page Turner chapter 11 . 5/18/2008
This is good so far, I likey alott! Post again as soon as ya can!