Some great songs in this chapter ... one or two I didn't know but I checked them out on utube - very nice!

& yes my son was looking at me weird when I was singing along to the lyrics lol

Edward showing his insecurities in this chapter brings out his human side more than ever - great writing

I am totally loving this story!

I think Carlisle & Edwards little chat would make an excellent one shot - so would Esme & Bellas ... they would hysterical.

Hi! I know that you published this a couple of years ago but its the first time I read it, Ive been loving it so far, so you should know that there are people who still enjoy reading about twilight. I just have a little problem with this chapter, when Bella implieds shes not regular with her period, that cant be cause in BD she actually says (Chapter 7, page 125) "... Id never been late a day in my life"... I dont know if you still update but just wanted to let you know, although maybe someone else already told you.

Thanks for this wounderful "bridge" between Eclipse and BD. Ill be reading your other stories after this!

Wow. This has been truly delightful, and i'm so sad to see you were never able to finish it. However, thank you so much for such a well written, believable story. I can't tell you what a delight it has been to read.

I love this chapter. i've loved all the time in San francisco, one of my favorite places in the world. But it's been so romantic and sweet to see them like this. The cookies made me smile, and I almost wondered if alice had set it up. I love knowing it really happened to people you know.

I've seen your story recommended on multiple favorite lists from other authors, and I'm so glad I finally gave it try. First of all, the description of the lodge, the surroundings, the people, the food, everything, is so beautiful and makes me want to go there for an extended vacation! But more than all that, the discussions between edward and bella are wonderful. This is what I always wanted to see, both of them finally opening up and discussing all those things they never share with each other. This chapter in particular. I always resented that Jacob Black ended up being a good guy, because i found him to be a bullying manipulative boy who assaulted Bella with that forced kiss. When she said no, he didn't stop, then teased her about it, even to getting her dad on his side. It was the only time I disrespected Charlie, a police chief who thought it was ok that a boy forced himself on his daughter. Yeah, it's always been a big issue with me. I never felt Jacob really loved bella, but more that it was a way to get back at vampires. If he'd honestly loved her, he'd never have done all the things he did. So, in your story, having edward point this all out and having bella realize how Jacob had really been, made me very happy.

Omg I have just finished reading Blue Moon Over Manka's I thought it was wonderful. I thought you captured Bella and Edward and their feelings for each other to a tee. I can't believe when I got to the end of this chapter that was it. Do you have anymore for this because I need to know how it ended it is fantastic and you should be proud of what you have written. I love everything about it I have even told all my gilfriend to read it is my favourite story hands down. Thank you so much for what you have written I hope you do have a ending to this story because I would love to finish reading it.

I can't make myself believe that Jake is really THAT bad but i still loved what you did. Plus, I can see where you got everything, and it does make sense. I am just an optimist and as much as I love Edward, I think Jake is a good guy. This chapter was amazing. The fight was great and needed. Fighting like that bring you closer, makes the relatiohship better. It was good to see them not so guarded with each other.

please continue! i am dying here!

i loved the music! It was fun! And I had completely forgotten about that Kelly Clarkson song...thanks for using it!

Favorite line "What fresh hell is this?" Every time i hear or read that, i bust out laughing!

Love your writing. Esp. liked these lines, "Cheese-induced coma" and "Open those beautiful eyes, my little inert mass."

I found your page through IMDB...so glad I did! I am really enjoying this story so far and I really can't wait to see how their conversations go, how their relationship will progress. It seems you are a wonderful writer and have made and awesome story! The song for this chapter...it broke my heart. SO beautiful and sad.

why why WHY are you diong this to me? please update soon! i cant wait till the story is complete! PLEASE