i really really really love it! all the chapters, not just this one. although im a little worried... i've notice the story is not complete yet, and you haven't update in a long time, are you planning to continue the story? you should! it is amazing! please!

yhe best fanfiction ever!

pls update

great great story! are you going to update any time soon?

Are you ever going to finish this magnificent tale? :)

I thought Bella had gained some insight into why they had to wait. Guess I was wrong. Does sound like a fun way to take a shower.

Just keeps getting better. Easy to see why Edward didn't want to take the call with Bradley in the room. Would be a little hard to explain why you were telling your father that your fiance had indeed survived your first real attempt at intimancy. Bradley is a nice guy. Certainly sounds like a Southern gentleman. Maybe his mother was orginally from the South? Or she just had an extraordinary sense of what manners really are.

Just love their talks. This story is the stuff dreams and the imagination of readers is made of.

And finally Edward can believe Bella is keeping nothing from him. Knows he has her entire heart. And after that very loving pushing of boundaries I don't think Edward needs to explain what might happen if they went any further. Think Bella's getting the idea that intense feelings is an understatement.

Had the feeling he had gone looking for that bobcat. And the bobcat had come looking for Bella. Edward being the better predator naturally won that contest. Boundaries are certainly being pushed. Maybe it really is time to tell Bella what Carlisle said about the human not surviving the chemistry unleashed during sex. At least that's what I thought he was saying. It wouldn't be a good thing if Bella short circuted. Carlisle might know exactly what to do, but Edward would be so frantic he might not be able to do anything. Boundaries are there for a reason. And just because he's fed recently it doesn't mean he would be able to maintain the control he needs not to kill her.

Amazing what Bella can do to herself. She's getting a little more of the information she needs, and it's showing her that her fears of Edward abandoning her are groundless. A little more of the boundaries have been crossed. This is such a good story. Should become required reading between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.

Outstanding. Absolutely love the conversations Bella and Edward have. Especially from his POV. The romance between them is very special. My late husband was that kind of romantic, just on a very human scale.

Another wonderful chapter. How Bella expected to get the no pj bottoms past Edward is beyond me. The interaction and new conversations and new honesty between them is another wonderful thing. I use that word a lot. But it's true. I'm getting the distinct feeling that Edward really needs to say a few things about what he and Carlisle discussed and what's going to happen when she's changed. She does know or suspect more than he's probably comfortable with.

Such a perfect setting for exploring their relationship and even relaxing a few boundaries. Edward probably learned ballroom dancing as a young human, and probably from his mother. As frustrated as they both are, maybe it would be a good idea for Edward to tell Bella a little of what Carlisle told him. That it could literally be her death if they went too far before the wedding and she is changed. Glad the guy was caught already. Did Edward sniff the bobcat?

So beautiful. Bella is finally believing Edward wants her forever and always. Really is going to fullfill his part of the bargain and is actually looking forward to her being a vampire. The love they share is already timeless. Edward is finally realizing he is going to have to tell her a lot of things he's been protecting her from. And as much as he has always thought he'd be destroying her soul he's coming to the realization that isn't necessarily true.