Reviews for Very Good
Brock's Geodude chapter 1 . 3/29
Good job with the lawyer encouraging his assistant to steal. :p But seriously, this was cute.
iryna chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Aw, that was super adorable! :)
NotaPunk chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
That was so cute!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Heh .

SomeAnonReader chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
It was a cute/funny fic.

The gum mystery fits Maya really well.

Good job!
princessphilomena chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Very cute - I love how you captured Nick and Maya so well!

I hope to see more from you!
Touzen chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
aw, cute little maya/phoenix fluff! love the little zelda easter egg at the end _
Mad Clown Disease chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
This was adorable, so well done :3 I can totally picture this happening in the games.

"Uh oh. She’s actually learning from her boss. That’s actually really not good. At all."

Yeah yeah Phoenix, we know you're a kleptomaniac too XD
Geoutlit chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Good story overall. I can see this scene happining in the game. Charecters (sorry cant spell) stay true to there in game selfs.
NewTypeDemon chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Yes, when Phoenix and Maya interact outside of work, I would suspect it's something like this. Nicely written and well in keeping with the style of the game.
Sapphire Rose E chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
henhenhen so cute! thanks for writing
purrpickle chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Hee hee. That was cute! I can just see Phoenix's 'devil' persona popping up on his shoulder and teasing him. _

Keep up the good work!

j chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
aw... cute!

Their dialogue is very true to the game, I liked that alot.

Well written and it leaves me wanting more to the story!
Toby Danger chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Just adorable. Maya in full-on daffy mode is too cute for words, and it's nice to see Phoenix adnowledge how different she looks in her non-medium clothes The subtle hints at romance were also well placed. Good fun, I really enjoyed this.