|Reviews for Very Good|
| Brock's Geodude chapter 1 . 3/29
Good job with the lawyer encouraging his assistant to steal. :p But seriously, this was cute.
| iryna chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Aw, that was super adorable! :)
| NotaPunk chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
That was so cute!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
| SomeAnonReader chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
It was a cute/funny fic.
The gum mystery fits Maya really well.
| princessphilomena chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Very cute - I love how you captured Nick and Maya so well!
I hope to see more from you!
| Touzen chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
aw, cute little maya/phoenix fluff! love the little zelda easter egg at the end _
| Mad Clown Disease chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
This was adorable, so well done :3 I can totally picture this happening in the games.
"Uh oh. She’s actually learning from her boss. That’s actually really not good. At all."
Yeah yeah Phoenix, we know you're a kleptomaniac too XD
| Geoutlit chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Good story overall. I can see this scene happining in the game. Charecters (sorry cant spell) stay true to there in game selfs.
| NewTypeDemon chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Yes, when Phoenix and Maya interact outside of work, I would suspect it's something like this. Nicely written and well in keeping with the style of the game.
| Sapphire Rose E chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
henhenhen so cute! thanks for writing
| purrpickle chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Hee hee. That was cute! I can just see Phoenix's 'devil' persona popping up on his shoulder and teasing him. _
Keep up the good work!
| j chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Their dialogue is very true to the game, I liked that alot.
Well written and it leaves me wanting more to the story!
| Toby Danger chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Just adorable. Maya in full-on daffy mode is too cute for words, and it's nice to see Phoenix adnowledge how different she looks in her non-medium clothes The subtle hints at romance were also well placed. Good fun, I really enjoyed this.