|Reviews for Green Eyes|
| Wolfie Loves FanFiction chapter 1 . 7/16
This is the best fan fiction I've read so far. Amazing! That's all I can say.
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 3/8
thank you for the chapter and story so far
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 3/6
loving it thank you
| StEmpois chapter 12 . 12/28/2016
I do believe you are German, since you are mixing "if" and "when", teo words which are the same in German : "wenn". "If Voldemort took possession of my body while I was sleeping..."
| StEmpois chapter 6 . 12/28/2016
Dear author, "if" is NEVER followed by conditional (would-form) but by a past tense or a past perfect. Therefore you must write "if they had seen... / If he saw" and NOT "if they would have seen...". Are you German? In German you use the conditional form in both halves of the hypothesis: wenn ich sehen würde, würde ich...", but that is not the case in English.
| Tiffany McDonald chapter 3 . 8/17/2016
Just a few mis-spellings, but other than that, great!
| Tiffany McDonald chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
Love it! :) I will continue to read more.
| Tiffany McDonald chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Love it! I would love to read more about Harry and his relationship with Professor Snape.
| Harry fan 1 chapter 6 . 2/6/2016
| aalens chapter 16 . 1/15/2016
I have greatly enjoyed this story, so I'm now going to read the sequel—or I will once I've had a night's sleep...well, half a night anyway as your fic had kept me up too long, as good stories are inclined to do. Lol
Thanks for writing it and for all the work of translating it too.
| aalens chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Excellent start! After far too many years of reading HP Fanfiction, these days it takes an exceptional story to catch my interest as this one has. Thank you.
| tanithlipsky chapter 16 . 11/13/2015
| HazeLilyBluera chapter 16 . 10/3/2015
Too lazy to use my account to review.
This story was great!
It hurts so much to type because my fingers are frozen
| Grunt chapter 16 . 7/1/2015
I love Sev and Harry's relationship here; it is not too forced or too soft. They got around each other pretty well as a father and son would.
| Peredhel chapter 2 . 4/16/2015
I see you are a Ranger... has it occurred to you that Halt is simply and older Severus who went back in time? It fits perfectly...